Reviews for Simple Glance
Heather chapter 3 . 5/17/2005
lol i love all your plotlines so much! this is great, i love the james as nerd lily as popular miss gorgeous. love it. btw, are you planning on finishing this one either?
02947201937189203 chapter 3 . 3/16/2004
Hey! Great story! Update soon!
lilyflower009 chapter 3 . 3/12/2004
Hey, great fic! I love the way Lily is popular and James is nobody, for once. It gets a little dull when they're both popular or James is the 'most amazing guy at Hogwarts'.
rockluver chapter 3 . 3/11/2004
Yo ! I liked this chapter very much, but there is one thing I don't understand, Remus likes ceso and from what I read in some of your other storie, I realised ceso likes Sirius, so I'm really mixed up.
Anyway, I was wondering, is Harry James's kid... or yours ? (lol, just kidding, don't take it personal, but I like to tease people...)
You go, girl !
rockluver chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
Hello, ceso, real smart move, I realy didn't think Gilderoy was good enough for you. So, what's the baby's name going to be ? (lol, just kidding) .
Be sure to tell me when you give him a name...(lol)
hunniechic66 chapter 3 . 2/19/2004
AH! oh, hey, it's me again. I kinda feel like im a review stalker or something cause i keep on reviewing all of your stories with such enthusiasm. Hm, oh well-they're just that good. Oh, and the whole"aahh"thing was cause i couldn't believe you'd stop wirting at such a crucial moment where lily already decided to ask James to the dance.I mean, what is this?How can you not update like that? That just makes me cry out in pain. Ok, i'll stop exaggerating but i really want to see what happens next in this story. I think it's gonna be so great. The only thing though: i saw how you wrote that you changed their year from third to sixth, i think? Well, and this is only my opinion and i don't mean anything by it, but if they were in third year, that would kind of fit the characters a lot better. If they were in third year or maybe fourth cause then that would make them about 13/14 years old and at that age most guys are scrawny like James and his Quiddich career could begin at that age. Then, if he went to the ball with Lily, she could see that he's her soulmate but because he would be the Gryffingor's (brilliant) seeker then all the other girls would flock to him too (just cause he's now popular) when in reality Lily was the one who recognized his charms before he was popular. And then, for example he could get caught up in all of his popularity- meaning he'd appear arrogant- for which Lily would break up with him, and James, deppressed, would become even more popular with the girls and Lily would detest him on the outside but really like him on the inside cause she knew his true self before he was popular... and i think i started babbling cause my imagination ran away with me once again as it always does. so, i think you should continue this story, whatever you write i'd really want to read it and see how it works out. Oh, and i really like what you've done with the characters by the way, especially Remus and Sirius, and James and Lily and...alright, i like all of them very much. They're great. And the other thing i wanted to say... i think im experiencing short term memory loss cause i keep on forgetting what i wanted to say so: Update soon please :)
Princess Hermione chapter 3 . 2/17/2004
very cute! I love it when girls are so confident that it makes guys just blow over...lol anyway keep writing!
Princess Hermione *The one and only*
Annieboo92 chapter 3 . 1/29/2004
hey! i really like the one's where it's james that's a dork, because they're so unique, every one else seems to have him set as this popular jock, but i like the way you have him done. excellent, write some more!
Anmylica chapter 3 . 1/29/2004
Well hurry up with the next chapter, it's awesome!
*_~Brittny Anmylica Cain~_*
*_~Loraliant Angelisa Snape~_*
Diehard Toad chapter 2 . 12/29/2003
I really liked it! Yay! It gets annoying sometimes hearing about how hot James and Sirius are and junk. That doesn't keep me from liking them tho!
infiniteternity chapter 2 . 7/25/2003
kool, yeah you finally updated. This is so cool "go james" sorry i'm really excited about thte whole mauderer thing! Can you make James a little more confident i mean really he is like totally i dont know how about like a cherry when ever he is in the middle of crowds!

Wow sirius i like totally love him! Kool and Remus and Peter(i hate his guts) Well update update update soon
Alia5 chapter 2 . 7/24/2003
I like the story and it was a good way to encorporate(?) Peter in. I would have to say all's well except spelling. You might want to work on that.
Gwen chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
I really liked this story,mostly. However,I think you made Lily sound a little slutty. Otherwise, your story was really great, it's not the usual James-is-oh-so-popular kind of thing. Go you! _
infiniteternity chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
nice That was a good start for the story i think you should continue it asap! There just aren't enough "James is not popular and lily is" stories and i think this one is perticularly interesting!
slytherindork00 chapter 1 . 4/8/2003
hey i liked your story! please update it!
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