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please make more I love it

Hes already Sued up in the first 2 paragraphs. God, why is this fandom so overrun with Mary Sue OC's?

Anyway, you should delete this and try again, if your determined to have an OC, turn down his Sueish qualities and for gods sake don't make him a dragon. Its been done countless times and its never been done well.

To elaborate, you know why people root for characters? Because they're not perfect, they have to grow and get stronger/better over time, they don't "woo" the girls at first. Your character is the opposite of that

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A random question. What do you think are the ORC's musical tastes? I do know Koneko is into hip hop (check her Wikia page under Trivia) as for the others Akeno may be a metal head (it would make sense with her personality), Rias may be into a mix of Classical and Punk music, and Kiba perhaps into Rock bands like Guns And Roses, Skid Row, Motley Crue, etc. I don't know what type of music Owen will be into though.

I wonder if you are going to write lemons. After the Owen vs Chicken match make his relationship public. That should get plenty of reactions

Which pieces did Owen get from Raiser? If I were to guess I think he got Ravel, Isabella, and Karlamine or Yubellina (the latter would deal a blow to Raiser's ego). Owen just owned Raiser in every way. Do you watch UFC? If so what is your take on Conor McGregor and take on Ronda's 40 second loss?

What a Phenomenal reference in this chapter, and also isn't Koneko a wrestling fan as well. She was in a Tiger Mask disguise during Issei and Akeno's date when spying on them with the peerage and she does use wrestling holds. Also what are your thoughts on CM Punk (as well as the Wrestle Kingdom 11 main event with Okada and Omega getting 6 stars from Meltzer), cause Owen comes off as a mix of him and Dean Ambrose. Unless you named Owen after Kevin Owens (who would have a great feud with CM Punk) this story is awesome. I like how you made Issei as mentor cause no other story I read has done that.

Broken Matt Hardy is currently one of my favorites right now (It is WONDERFUL that he has inspired this story from you and I'm a fan of Vanguard One plus is there gonna be a character like that with Owen and the Final Deletion was the best one) in all of Space and Time and he and Jeff were two of the reasons I started watching WWE back in the day. I was always a Hardy Boyz Mark and they both have had their trials and tribulations in their careers, but now they are back under Matt's BROKEN Brilliance. BTW I can't wait for their ROH aka the Honerable Wrestling match with the Young Bucks aka the Bucks Of Youth. MeekMahan and the man of 3 H's lost out on them. BTW I can't wait to read the rest of your story.

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great chapter keep up the awesome work :)

This isn't fake ads wrestling. .-. There is no Aj Styles in DxD.

Why would he not get stronger than Sirzechs? He is a Dragon. Dragons are the strongest.

Can we please not have Akeno in the harem? Someone like Gabriel, Serafall, Le Fay, etc. Koneko, Irina, and Asia are definitely a must though :3

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