What have I just read and where can I find more of it? I have to tell you how much I adore this story. I love that it started off more light-hearted - here's Neverland and the lost boys and fun nicknames and it slowly got darker and I was so engrossed in the story, I didn't even notice until I was questioning why Hermione was hugging Ginny and Voldemort was there...

Well written and the story just really drew me in. I must admit I was disappointed to find it ending. I was hoping to find out more about the pirates. I actually think that if the pirates are taking away the Lost Boys (who are children that Voldemort kidnaps) could the Order be the pirates?

I love how you've incorporated Hogwarts and the surrounding area and magic into Peter Pan. This story was simply amazing!

Wow! Omg wow this was soetacular. I am a major fan of Peter Pan and the way you've created a world where Peter Pan actually makes sense in HP is amazong ! I lofed it so much. There was this sence of dread all through the story and the ending was so powerful. I was able to tell which characters were which, I'm pretty sure (Fred, George, Ron, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Snape and Voldemort of course) the way you introduced the characters was strong and powerful just like the rest of the story. I loved it so much,and the bit about the clock was great! I could keep going. I can't fault this at all!

At first, I was a bit confused just because I was trying to keep up with which characters had which names but as I continued reading, I really fell in love with it. Poor Dibs! I feel bad for Peter since he clearly wants the Lost Boys to have a good life but he's misguided. I thought it was tragically sweet how Dibs said she'd rather walk the plank than be a pirate, just like Peter would. I really liked seeing the way Dibs' attitude changed towards Wendy throughout as well - really a great story :)

This was really nice and I locve how you mixed in pieces of Neverland and Peter Pan lore with Harry Potter characters. The dialogue really did feel like dialogue spoken between kids playing about and enjoying the different rides and carousel. I think you used a lot of imagination and this was an interesting read "the dream Peter once gave her has turned into a nightmare" Ah I like this slightly off-kilter and ambiguous ending. Very well done.

Goodness, this is amazing! To use the Peter Pan story, let alone incorporate the HP Characters into it is really a great idea!
Honestly, I couldn't stop reading until I finished the whole thing. Mostly because I wanted to see if there is a kind of 'solution' to who each character resembles. I think I have figured some of the out, like Snape, Harry, the twins and Neville (I hope I am right so far :) Though I am still pondering about Dibs... red hair... first I thought she was Lily, but Ginny would be fitting, too...
So despite my wild guesses, I really liked that you continued writing it in the - let's call it Peter-pan-style without actually giving away who everyone is :)
And to compare Voldemort with the shaddow is absolutely brilliant!
You know, maybe you could write a sort of sequel to this one day?:)
~Lexi~

Okay, wow... I needed a little bit longer to get into the whole circumstances of the story, but I actually liked how you took the Harry Potter characters and put them all into an alternate Peter Pan scenario, it was very creative.
I liked your descriptions a lot, they were very vivid and detailed, I loved that. However, I felt like your dialogue was lacking in comparison, and also the parts around the dialogue tags often felt a little bit off, they didn't reach the same brilliance the rest of your story had.
The characterisations were nicely done, and helped me a lot to keep the people apart without their HP names.
Very well done! :)

I loved it :) The re-imagining of Peter Pan was amazing, and I loved how dark everything was. I was a bit confused at first by what was happening, but I guess that's because 'Dibs' doesn't remember the outside so she can't give context... I'd have love to get a more thorough explanation of what happened for this verse to get this way, but the way you wrote it didn't make it necessary, which was pretty neat :)
Nice work :)
Cheers!