Reviews for Team RWBYS
Astrel chapter 26 . 7/1
HA! i bet that weapon Soichi used was based on God Eater, am i correct? also the 3 new "rivals"(?) reminds me of the Homonculus from FMA..
Awesome Chapter.
monkwindu chapter 12 . 6/29
dude this is genuinely one of the best written fics I have seen. really enjoying it. Keep it up!
Master Yeet chapter 105 . 6/7
Honestly Volume 6 and 7 are good and bad at the same time so you should just srick to some original content (is content the right word?) I would recommend maybe adding the characters locarions or lore if you want to but it's up to you.
Dexter Hines chapter 1 . 5/31
This is a good story setsuna I’m not gonna sit here and tell you it’s bad
Random65 chapter 1 . 12/4/2019
What are you talking about I love this story.
DatRtfantho chapter 1 . 2/27/2019
Heard that you let a guy who used to be called RedHood use ur OCs in his story(s) a while back. Never really got attached to them because the story kept getting deleted. So, here I am. I've been wanting to read this for a while but kept focusing on my own OC story, and I guess now it's a good enough time as any to start with Volume 6 and whatnot.

I'll try to leave some reviews as I go on, but I don't want to clutter up the review tab XD
Ugh Okay chapter 1 . 2/10/2019
This is terrible and you should feel bad. Poor work choice, grammar and otherwise. On the entirety this is cringe. I always hate it when the MC is some genocidal maniac, which people think is "cool" for some reason or whatever. Why can't we have a MC that likes to bake cake and hand out marshmallows(laced with LSD)? I just want a well written story where the character do nothing but chat and bang, is that so much to ask for? *sigh*
aveshetta chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
too many oc for me...
AtashiWa chapter 87 . 5/28/2018
Really great to see you again !

Without a doubt, it was your most serious chapter, I was really surprised to see that, but it was one of my favorite chapter because we know much about Soichi feelings and what he thinks about him and his life.
Besides, even if I dislikes Blake since V5, It was a good moment between them and I can't wait to see Soichi and Weiss talk about that.

See ya soon I hope.
Mr.Shades42 chapter 52 . 5/21/2018
You repeated the same thing twice near the end.
Energy Dragon Slayer chapter 84 . 12/30/2017
The fight between soichi and ying made me think of chiron vs achilles in fate/apocrypha
Guest chapter 84 . 12/25/2017
AWW~! C'MON PLEASE~~~! This story is already beyond rated T! AND I'M SO PATHETIC I HARASS AUTHORS TO ADD MY DISTURBING FETISHES INTO THEIR STORIES
And it doesn't have to be a full detail of the scene, just some minor stuff like kissing, clothes off with the exception of her being covered in a very short see-through dress that shows her naked form without the bra and undies, touching, Adam on top of a tied-up Blake, some moans, that sort of thing. It doesn't have to say the mature stuff, some writers do that all the time in rated t stories, they won't fully reveal what happens but gives out what will happen, sometimes before and after the scene. So c'mon I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE~~~~! BECAUSE I AM A WORTHLESS SAD CUNT.
Adam kidnaps Blake, raped and cage her inside his room, chained to his bed. We all know he's the possessive type and he would make sure Blake doesn't leave him ever again, even if it meant claiming her every day.
BECAUSE I AM A WORTHLESS PIECE OF SHIT THAT GETS OFF ON THIS
Make the group prove to the entire world, on recorded video, that the headmaster told in person, framed them and tried to arrest them for the evil people to catch. I think that would be the shockest discovery everyone in Remnant has heard and seen of, and it would ruin the headmaster and have him be blamed for the fall of Beacon and it would force the Atlas army to apologize to Yang and the others and their status as huntsmen and huntresses is restored. I think the people of Mistral, including the students, will be so upset at the headmaster that they want someone else to replace him, a good guy. BECAUSE I LOVE DICTATING TO AUTHORS HOW TO WRITE THEIR STORIES AND HAVE NO IDEA HOW PLOT STRUCTURE WORKS OR HOW DRAMATIC IRONY WORKS. I ALSO HAVE NO IDEA HOW PEOPLE WORK OR THINK AND BELIEVE MY PLAN TO BE COMPETELY VIABLE

Also Winter is going to wish that she didn't push Weiss away, I think she'll be hurt when Weiss says the same words she told her "I don't have time for time" and walks away leaving Winter to regret everything she did and realizing that Weiss was right when she told her she was becoming like Jacque and becomes more hurt when Weiss ignores her and doesn't want to see her as a sister anymore, I think Winter will do anything to remedy their relationship, even if she had to do something that will put Jacque to shame and have Ironwood acknowledge his mistake and makes things right again. Jacque is going to wish that he didn't take away Weiss' heiress status as well. The people would side with Weiss instead of the SDC, that would be bad for Jacque and Whitley. I HAVE THE MORALITY AND COGNITIVE ABILITIES OF A THREE YEAR OLD WITH FETAL ALCOHOL SYNDROME
aveshetta chapter 60 . 12/9/2017
Soo Soichi got a new arm ? Why i didn't notice it before
AtashiWa chapter 82 . 12/7/2017
Omg you're back, it's been so long.
And like always, good chapter. :)
Username to be determined chapter 1 . 12/6/2017
...I just looked at the summary of this story. I have spotted a reference to Fate/ Stay Night: Unlimited Blade Works Abridged version.
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