Reviews for Invasion
InkedPage chapter 5 . 6/6
I am in love with this story. I can't wait to read more !
Please update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next
badculture chapter 1 . 12/12/2018
I really dig this fic.

Ursa is so good 3
RavensStag chapter 5 . 12/12/2018
Every time I read a chapter from the story I just feel like I can really see the world you have made, your fanfic is amazing
Guest chapter 5 . 12/12/2018
This is a wonderful chapter
Mel72000 chapter 5 . 12/3/2018
Thank you very much for this chapter !
pfft chapter 4 . 10/25/2018
This is quite good, but I disagree that quick pacing is necessarily 'unrealistic'. Don't be afraid also to just write 'weeks passed' if that becomes needed.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2018
This is beautiful! Please write more. The tension is palpable
Bopdawoo chapter 4 . 9/16/2018
I'm loving this story so far. The depth and thought you're putting into developing this little corner of Ba Sing Se is amazing. I truly can't wait to see what's in store for 'Lee' and his mom :D
RavensStag chapter 4 . 9/12/2018
This story is so fantastic and I’m so happy it got an update
Notone chapter 4 . 9/12/2018
I love this story so much!
actresspdx chapter 4 . 9/11/2018
Whoo! New chapter, I was so happy to see this story in my inbox. Hopefully that smoke isn't going to be a problem...
axel100 chapter 4 . 9/11/2018
Good to see you update this. Looking forward to Azula making an appearance. Is she aware Zuko and Ursa are in the city?
Guest chapter 4 . 9/10/2018
beautiful chapter! i love the tension and character building. i’m glued to this work. thank you so much for blessing us with this story :))
Mel72000 chapter 4 . 9/10/2018
Thank you for this chapter !
Guest chapter 4 . 9/10/2018
YES, I was so happy to see this new chapter, I stayed up and read it instead of going to bed on time! Wondering what might be causing that new smell, but I have my suspicions...
Hope you're feeling good about this chapter because I sure enjoyed it!
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