NOTHANKYOUIMFINE!

Sooooooo sweet!

SHIP SHIP

ALL ABOARD THE MARIO BROS. SHIP! WE ARE SETTING SAAAAAIL!

This was really sweet :D I've been hunting for some Mario x Luigi for a while now, a fic without death or angst, and this is JUST what I was looking for! The only thing is, this felt a li'l (a lot) cheesy at times...but I always said that cheesiness is good so long as the feelings are genuine :) Great job!

Awwww, that was so sweet! I like how you write the bros, they're cute together. :) (I really like that broyfriend pun) I smiled at the ending too. We never see Mario afraid, so I liked seeing his nightmare, actually kinda what I would've pictured. Anyways good job! :D (I also really liked the first chapter, I must've gushed and said awww like ten times!)

Awwwww this was all kinds of sugary sweetness. I got a good toothache, but that's alright because it never hurts to read some major fluff. I salute you for being one of the few authors who dabble in Mariocest. Its so hard to find them in the clutter of other stories. This one was really romantic. Imagine sharing a loving moment on the night of the Star Festival? It sounds so tantalizingly fantastic. Luigi giving Mario that gift was the icing on the cake too.

Hmm, if you're looking for suggestions, I may have a small one. Its so typical really and nothing new, but what about a one-shot where one of the brothers gets jealous when they see the other being flirted with by someone? Maybe by Prince Peasley? Or what about one with Mr. L and Mr. M? Or even one where one of the brothers has been trying to figure out a way to propose to the other? Lol that's all I can think of really. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!