Thanks

I worked. my. way. through your six chapters, while not my fault pride style of writing, the story held. together nicely. Interesting slant. It gained a follow. Writing at times is hard, yet other times,it is a fire hose, barely under control as thoughts burst in every direction.

Very good start to a story. Please continue.

The closing scene absolutely priceless.

This has a great tone to it, so I hope the story continues. The only critiques I have is some awkward dialogue and a seeming lack of forward momentum.

I love this story and would love to see more of it, but if not, thank you for sharing still!

So it is same harry potter taking everyone's shit ff , I will give this ff a skip ,not gonna read anymore

Keep up the good work.

Please keep up the good work

Couldn't care less* learn English!

Thanks for the chapter.
I hope Harry someday confronts Molly and Charlie. He risked his life to save Ginny; they don;t warn him about the dragons.

Glad to see you back, and I'm in the same job boat. fingers crossed and hopefully real life progresses well, and the great story as well!

Love the update. Are you going for a Familiar Bond with the Basilisk? Quite a few stories have this process for the Familiar bond.
Looking forward to your next chapter.

You tried re-enacting mundane scenarios, but it just made this story feel empty. The fact they casually discuss a fight that ended with physical violence without getting either hyped up, worried or angry (the three normal responses) and they just laugh off the fact Ron poured scalding liquid onto some poor girls head for daring to say something he didn’t like.. well, it’s worrying to say the least.

A most amazing story. Thank you