Great and interesting story

I actually stopped reading the comics when otto killed peter so until now had no idea who anna was.
I have a new favorite spidey ship.

Oh, this story is so good. Yes, I know I've already reviewed, but you should totally continue this. It would be awesome to see a chapter about Peter making amends with Kaine or the Avengers. Your writing style is really good and detailed, and severely lacking in grammar mistakes which is refreshing when most writers don't know when to use there, their, or they're. I seriously hope you continue this or me and many others will be stuck rereading the same glorious six chapters forever.

Oh this is so good! Its been a while and I hope you update, or pick this story back up. I really love your writing. This is like the only fanfic with good writing. Not to bash other authors but not many know how to write well. While your story is really heavy on the descriptions and thoughts it still has quite a bit of action to keep things interesting but also build anticipation at the same time. I really hope you get around to writing his dealing with the avengers and other people and friends. Kudos to you! Hope you keep writing and update this story.

Fuck yeah, always hated how Peter's death was brushed off this shit made tear up . Great chapter!

I hope you one day return to this work of art. It's up there with the greats, and I'll treasure it forever.

Not too bad. But every paraph is a monologue. Makes reading tiresome and severely messes with sense time and flow.

I want more, please and thank you

continue

and then it just went down hill from there

I have to say that was one of the most emotional first chapters I've ever read in a story, like ever, and I've read hundreds

Incredible story, I found it yesterday and I couldn’t stop reading it.

I loved the way you took the path of explaining Peter's demise and his own personal heaven, heaven that certainly helped him grow out of that flawed way of thinking and making him better; the way you utilize 'his' company was enjoyable.

I hope that your have as much fun writing this, as it was for me to read it.

I’ll be here for the next part. Good luck!.

Nice work

Amazing story, please update

Did Heaven make Peter petty, it's kind of hard to ask May to be on team Spidey when she's only got reality to work with.