I love this story! Please continue!

I loved it! Update soon.

Is ace a lwsbian because I feel like ellie was only one for Riley but otherwise she's straight

Oh shit!

Oh poor Joel! It's so weird how ellie would do that but I can see it. So realistic!

Yes!

Bravo, bravo! Very well written, especially since most of the beginning was written in second person! That can sometimes be very difficult, so great job!

Really cool intro- although I disagree that Ellie would just shut Joel out for lying to her. They both know what they mean to each other (Joel's 'daughter' and Ellie's father/person she cared about that hasn't abandoned her) and if they did that, it would kill them every day. Please continue. Liking this.