Great job! Both poetic, captures the character of twins... maybe not perfectly, but very close, and perfectly shows the contrast between them.

Jordan: I'm not sure where do you see "spin" in this when this is pretty much her canon characterisation(except for the "fragile" part)

You definitely put a great spin on an otherwise bland character although am biased and liked Dahlia's a wee bit more! Very well done!

Cool chapter. Shows how sinister she is

Loved this chapter. PLEASE WRITE SOME FEENRIS FANFICTION. I love that couple

So this is Pantoum poetry? Interesting.

Well-thought and well-made for these two characters. Though to be bias, I loved the poem of Dahlia more because you show how much of a cunning woman she is with her innocent outlook.

Interesting take on Iris's character with the use of poem. Loved the repetition you made here.