Not bad! I've only read one other story where the twins get Harry.
Luna, however plays prominently in several good stories.

Great little story, thanks for sharing it!

Great story hope to see more from you soon.

Great start.

Ugh. With the sibling spat, it makes me wonder why Parvarti is even involved in this relationship. She’s a slag and she’s a horrible person. Sounds a lot like my brother and there is no bloody way I’d ever let him near the person I like because knowing him (or Parvarti based on her previous transgressions) he/she would go out of their way to create drama and either ruin my chances or ruin the relationship if there was one. It’s not even hypothetical, he has done that so it’s not much of a stretch to think Parvarti would do the same to Padma.

I would love to see how this ends after the war

A very enjoyable story. It was fun to read and I liked how you handled Ron in the bashing. It didn't feel mean spirited like I've read in some others. Harry getting twins, ah, I always like that. This one does feel like it can be expanded though. But that's what I feel. A nice story. Good job.

- Fashion
Far from my expertise to say the least.

But I'm not quite sure on the colours of the dresses that the twins were wearing.

Would seem like they'd clash with their complexions in addendum to the highlight colours not really meshing with the dress ones.

Could be a shade issue, I suppose. As there's more than one version of pink and orange. Some work, others don't.

I'd have suggested a light blue variant for both, maybe cerulean or powder blue and then use the highlight colours to separate them.

A crimson red or golden sash for Parvati, while a bronze one would work for Padma.

And no, those wouldn't be Ravenclaw colours as that blue is darker, far as I can tell.

Being male my capacity to see shades is rather more limited than it is for a lady.

- Relationship
If it does go the distance for Harry and the Twins, then lucky him for bring heir to two families.

As that would suggest possibly two separate legal entities, namely Lord Potter and Lord Black and as such marrying both, wouldn't be bigamy.

As Lord Potter is only married to one woman and the same applies to Lord Black. The fact that the ladies are not the same individual.

Well, as said, separate legal entities. Padma would be say Lady Black, whereas Parvati would be Lady Potter. Padma would have no legal say on House Potter matters, while the same would apply to Parvati and House Black.

The fact that Lord Potter and Lord Black would be the same person is irrelevant. From a legal perspective, they're different beings.

You see similar situations in the Corporate World with legal responsibilities within companies tied to the same Multinational.

*shrugs*

- Team Rocket
And yes, the Trio does need to plot Snivellus' demise, considering how intent he is on continuing a childhood feud with those not even conceived at the time.

Not as if his "spying information" was useful, considering nothing was ever done with it.

Making the net effect if his spying zero.

So him blasting off into the sunset permanently? Shouldn't have that negative an impact.

Thanks for the chapter!

Great story

A very fun read.
The Ball was certainly more realistic then canon. I never went to a school dance that didn't have piked punch. 8)
Loved Ron's punishment.

Ron Needs His Ass Kicked.

A great two-shot here! Very good reading!

Yeah, I don't know what kind of person Harry is that he doesn't even tell Ron to go to hell and remains friends with him. I don't care how loyal a person may have been, if they insult people like Ron has been, they are going on my shit list. This is just frustrating to read.

This was sweet