Tge first two sentences of this chapter got me creeped out already especially when you're imagining it veeeerrryyyy cleaaarrrllllyyyy. XD

This is such a sad story! *sobbing uncontrollably* So beautiful though...

what the hell did you just make me read? why would you do this to me? how could you? what the heck man? why? why would you tear my heart from my chest and toy with it as if it were your own personal play thing? how dare you?

You made me absolutely heartbroken. I love it nonetheless XD but seriously, i read your mabill story at Archive of our own. The Egyptian Au. I absolutely adored it as well. It made me really sad too ;_; you keep making me sad and bitter. I dunno if i should love and hate you for it but one things for sure i enjoyed reading your fics. But seriously whenever i think about this fic, especially the epilogue... i feel pain in my chest for a second. I hope you continue making Mabill fics. I love your works~ Thank you for this and your other Mabill fics~ you srsly quenched my thirst for this ship~~

Hey, first of all, how dare you?

Nice job Mabel! Personally, I would have thrown more things at the creep, but your way works too.

That's so sad! I couldn't imagine watching everyone I love die.

This was such a heartbreaking story. I am sad that bill died and left mabel alone at the same time i am happy they got to spend time together. Bravo bravo.

But I wonder, if Mabel never was on the brink of death, and if Bill didn't have to let her drink the cup, would she have died alongside Bill? After all, being with your lover is the best way to die in a peaceful way right?

Shittttttt this made me ugly because of crying *sobs* And I also have cough and a flu and u just made it worst because of your sad story! *cries*

This made me cry. why. why.

why...why would you do this...this is evil I came here for pirates and adventure and I got my heart ripped out! all in all one of the best stories I've read thank you for being an amazing writer

I didn't need my heart anyway
I've been reading your stories and you have a thing for breaking people's hearts but omg you do it in such a beautiful way, I love your work

How could you do this?! This is super harsh! Even in your story 'new horizons' it ended quite happily! Whhyyy! This is to harsh!

And for the last time, it's me, the same guest.
Oh, wow, for some reason I expected this to have a happy end. I mean, it DID have a happy end, just... a bittersweet one.
Still loved it though! And now it's time for me to say farewell. In only three days, I have read every MaBill fic you wrote here, and I love every single one. Keep it up and never stop, because we need more. We always crave more.

See you sometime again!
~The same guest again