You’re just making Harry sputter and follow orders. He doesn’t even act like a prince but a worker

Why would he fear a robotic voice...

Why is Harry so trusting? It is quite annoyint

in early stages the story was too interesting but after shield attack it got boring as hell bcoz u were concerned on drugs and sex rather than fights and gameplays.. anyway it was a honest review from my side. u accept or not its up to u

I can't wait for the next chapter do you know when you are going to put up another chapter for this story. It is a wonderful story.

cant wait to read more of this story, it's very good.

okay, my mistake. i double checked and the sword Heimdall uses is actually named Hofund. so Tyrfing SHOULD still be free game. thor is a bit of a grey area for me in the marvel universe, so i dont know too much about the intricacies of the comics. as such i WILL make mistakes with references from time to time. and for that i apologize.

this was one of those moments. thankfully i caught it quickly. but i might not in the future, so i ask for your patience in that area.

thank you for your time.

slight issue. Tyrfing is actually already in use. it is heimdall's sword that he uses to activate the Bifrost. so it can't go to Harry. it's a small detail, and not well known, but it IS canon. while they typically just call it the bifrost sword, word of god (ie, the heads of disney and marvel studios) have confirmed this to be true.

however, given how far in this fic is, i would simply suggest you keep the name of Heimdall's sword as the bifrost sword.

and bear in mind that Tyrfing is its actual name for future reference.

the issue is, most of the named and legendary weapons of norse myth, are in fact already being wielded by an asgardian in the MCU. so your best bet is to use something from outside the MCU or norse mythology.

i typically suggest, and am using in my own fic, Leviathan, the ice axe used by Kratos in God of War (2018). it is a badass weapon, designed to be a legendary norse weapon, but one that does not actually exist in norse myth or the MCU, or even any of the marvel comics. which makes it perfect to give to someone like Harry, who ALSO does not appear in the comics or movies of Marvel.

anyways, just an FYI.

thank you for your time.

Hi. I'm really interested in seeing where you're going with this, but is it so difficult to go over each chapter you write with a word corrector to catch and fix any mistakes in grammar and/or syntax before you post them? The sheer amount of grammatical mistakes is making your story unbearable to read!

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter

Another awesome chapter, thanks

Another fantastic chapter , thanks for all the hard work you put into the story.

Thanks for another very enjoyable chapter

Really enjoyable story, thanks!

Apologies if this comes across as rude, and I by no means wish to rush you, but I am curious if you’re still working on the story? I ask because it seems the last upload was in May and I’m not sure of your upload schedule. Again, not trying to rush or pressure, simply curious. Hope you have a great day and merry Christmas