For the love of god please use a rape warning in the description of your fanfic! This was an amzing fanfic until I saw halter eleven. Some people can get triggered, my best friend had a seizure because somebody didn’t mention the rape! Some people here are children, as well, and it is unacceptable to have rape in a story unmentioned. The story 1-10 was lovely, please continue and heed my suggestions

Damnnn poor Lucy

Well that drama happened pretty fast on chapter 11. wasn't expecting that to happen but overall I'm excited to see what happens next with natsu and lucy.

please update soon, Im just dying to know what will happen next..!

You should put a warning at the beginning of this chapter for triggers of rape. I had to stop reading since it bothered me too much. Good luck with your story, but I had to give it up.

Omg this is so good! I just read this fanfiction and omg all of the feels
Gray is so nice :)
Poor lucy for getting raped! Good thing natsu saved her! Nalu ;)

What the crap is all of this. None of this makes sense. Is this nothing but a story to torment Lucy as much as possible? I can't even get any plot out of it. And what right does Natsu have to be upset? All you have shown with him the ENTIRE time, even in the flashbacks when he was supposedly in love with Lucy, is that he doesn't care one tiny bit about her. This sudden emotion from him doesn't make any sense either. I'm done with this. It's not a rollercoaster, it makes less sense than the Joker's mind.

Natsu needs to get off his high horse and stop making it all about how he is hurt. He left Lucy without been a word and even began dating someone else. What was he expecting? Lucy to sit and wait for him to come home? He is so full of himself. He needs to check himself before he wrecks himself!

As unfortunate the situation with Lucy is, maybe this is his wake up call and change his act and clean up his life and finally be truthful about his feelings towards Lucy and what he did to her.

Maybe put the trigger warning at the beginning of the chapter? That's what I do when I write a scene with implied rape. Just a suggestion. Besides that the chapter was good. I wonder when/why Lucy learned to play the guitar? Guess I'll find out later.

Damnit Dave! You had one job! Man, the last part of this chapter was so hard to read. :( I was hoping and praying Natsu would get there before he.. Went all the way. How could you do this author?! TT~TT I feel increasingly bad for Lucy every chapter, she's gone through so much already, and this definitely does not help. At least she and Natsu are on the path to recovering their relationship. I wish I could read chapter 12 right now lol

"Spread my ass cheeks" I'm fucking dying I can't

That 5SOS song is freaking heart breaking.

Ah yes, murder my soul why don't you

*chanting* NALU NALU NALU

I want my nalu to happen!