Reviews for The Missing Ketchum |
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Guest chapter 4 . 5/22 the last names are from authors and characters in movies and books same with first names. |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/22 there is a character from how to train your dragon. |
FrozenFlames12 chapter 1 . 8/2/2019 I don't usually do OC's, but I like your story so... Hear I am. Hope you like her. Name: Ayala Singar Gender: Female Age: 17 Home Town: Viridian City Physical Appearance: Short, messy white hair. Tan skin. Blue-green eyes. Tall. Muscular, but not very bulky. Two gold braces on her forearms. A clipped earring on one ear. Normal Clothing: A black T-shirt with a flaming skull. A black leather jacket. Faded ripped jeans. Black and red shoes. Has a pair of knives in pouches on her legs. Talents: Art. Swimming. Volleyball. Running. Writing. Personality: Has a dry, witty sense of humor. Sarcastic. Will go on and on about the things she likes. Likes to point out things wrong with books/movies, like continuity problems. Backstory: Ayala grew up in an orphanage from age 5 to age 12. She was adopted by her uncle, Arion. He loved her and she loved him. When she got her first pokemon at the late age of 15, she was in tears to have to leave. Arion trained her in all sorts of fighting styles, and martial arts. Ayala knew how to use daggers and throwing stars. Ayala once trained with the ninjas in the Hidden Village, but her time there was brief. Ever since then, she has been traveling to become stronger. Main Pokemon: 1. Charizard/Flame Female Shiny, larger than average, Mega stone Y Fire Fang, Dragon Tail, Dragon Claw, Thunder Punch, Fly, Flamethrower, Overheat, Seismic Toss, Bite, Dragon Breath, Arial Ace. 2. Gengar/Shadow Female Slightly lighter tips on her spines. Hypnosis, Dream Eater, Shadow Ball, Shadow Claw, Curse, Dark Pulse, Shadow Sneak, Toxic, Swords Dance, Destiny Bond. 3. Lucario/Lily Female Able to speak with aura Aura Sphere, Bone Rush, Power-Up Punch, Quick Attack, Metal Claw, High Jump Kick, Shadow Claw, Earthquake. 4. Umbreon/Crimson Female Red rings instead of yellow. Dark Pulse, Moonlight, Shadow Claw, Swift, Quick Attack, Slash, Zen Headbutt, Last Resort, Hidden Power, Hyper Beam, Detect. 5. Metagross/Eclipse Female Has amber ringed eyes, making the pupils look like the moon blocking out an eclipse (the amber irises) Metal Sound, Hyper Beam, Psychic, Meteor Mash, Power-Up Punch, Metal Claw, Zen Headbutt, Hammer Arm, Iron Defense. 6. Pidgeot/Talon Female A Flying Ice type due to intense weather atop Mt. Silver, where it was born and raised. It's snow white feathers (with hints of blue and some original coloring) reflect this. Ice Beam, Gust, Steel Wing, Sky Attack, Wing Attack, Air Slash, Razor Wind, Headbutt, Fly, Hyper Beam, Roost. No other pokemon are owned by Ayala. |
WAh chapter 11 . 9/29/2018 MORE! |
multyfangirl21 chapter 11 . 12/22/2017 so we can look forward to the next chapter some time between January and February? my siblings and I are all clustered in February and march but my boyfriend and I have our anniversary in January so i'd be happy if you managed to post the next chapter within the next 3 months , I've got plenty of stuff I could count it as a present for that it would make that day that much sweeter. i'm looking forward to reading the next chapter , oh! a thought that just occurred to me: will Ash travel through the other regions and meet his friends later on ? will he go through all the regions but in a different order perhaps? gotta stop reading so late when I have work to do the next morning, |
SpiritBlackPaw chapter 11 . 12/22/2017 Great chapter. Btw, you got me hooked on 'Hall of Fame' now. It's my new fav. |
Rogue Deity Master chapter 11 . 12/22/2017 Man I am almost tempted to reveal my salazzle trainer to you, I mean especially since that idea I told you about so long ago. I mean it's still an option to happen but it still depends on you, and I hope you gain some in emotional strength. If memory serves correctly you would emotionally hurting your favorite grass-type starter or at least one of them, I've actually been evolving that idea a little more and creating new parts that could be more interesting. |
I love reading123453 chapter 1 . 12/10/2017 can I still give an oc |
Palletboy2001 chapter 1 . 11/2/2017 You could use ash's rivals of anime as oc. It won't be difficult. |
Guest chapter 10 . 10/4/2017 Togedemaru 4 EVER! |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/4/2017 Togedemaru |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/18/2017 Name: Kuro Akutagawa Gender: Male Age: 17 Home town: Heahea City Physical appearance: 5ft 9in, long tied back black hair, blue eyes, slightly tanned. Normal clothing: A black hoodie with the word 'Believe' written in white on the back Talents: Very good actor on a daily basis (e.g. Hiding emotions from people) Personality: Acts rather cold to people who he hasn't known for a while and people who he doesn't trust. Acts Slightly Warmer to people he has known for longer. But he is still caring just in his own ways Backstory: When he was a child attending the Pokémon school, Kuro had found out that both his parents, who were exploring in Kalos for an unknown company, had a gone missing. He had no known relative and ended up being taken in by the kind friend of his parents Ms Akutagawa. Four years later, when he was 12 he decided to go on a journey aiming to find his missing parents only to find out something or someone has odd ties relating to his parents. So when he was 16 he decided to finally leave Alola to go to Kalos and stay there until he finds his parents. Main Pokémon team: 1. Species: Primarina Nickname: Gender: Female Special qualities: Is a calm level-headed Pokémon that is the one that stops quarrels in the team Move set:「ability: liquid voice」 Psychic, hydro pump, sparkling aria, hyper voice, moonblast, sing, disarming voice, aqua jet, blizzard perish song, dazzling gleam, misty terrain, 2. Species: Ampharos「no mega」 Nickname: Gender: Male Special qualities: Rather aggressive. Likes to pick fights and battle. Move set:「ability: static」Thunder wave, thunder, thunderbolt, thunder punch, charge beam, power gem, bulldoze, fire punch, dragon pulse, rain dance, focus blast, brick break, hyper beam, ion dulge 3. Species: Smeargle Nickname: Gender: Male Special qualities: Sadistic. likes to toy around with opponents Move set:「ability: technician 」 Imprison, transform, mean look, sleep powder, dark pulse, toxic, iron head, roost, sketch, sketch 4. Species: Lycanroc「midday」 Nickname: Gender: Male Special qualities: Aggressive, Acts like midnight form. Fights with ampharos. 「from being trained by only midnight lycanroc as a rockruff, Kuro's lycanroc has the move set of midnight lycanroc」 Move set: 「ability: sand rush」Taunt, sucker punch, snarl, crunch, stealth rock, stone edge, rock climb, counter, reversal brick break, rock tomb, roar, rock slide, sandstorm 5. Species: Raichu 「alolan form」 Nickname: Gender: female Special qualities: Is the motherly one that gets agitated only when she hasn't discharged enough electricity. Move set:「ability: surge surfer」thunder, volt tackle, quick attack, electro ball, thunderbolt, psychic, speed swap, rain dance, iron tail, thunder wave, focus blast, grass knot, thief, psyshock 6. Species: Aegislash Nickname: Gender: Male Special qualities: Rather shy. youngest team member Move set:「ability: stance change」destiny bond, retaliate, king's shield, sacred sword, shadow ball, shadow claw, gyro ball, metal sound, swords dance, flash cannon, brick break, autotomize, night slash Other Pokémon in care/living with him: Tyrunt There here you go:) |
Pikachu564 chapter 10 . 7/1/2017 Hey, amazing Chapter, It must be hard being Silver, having to join Team Rocket now, but in order to defeat the, one must become one. (I think that's how the saying goes.) And just how thing went to crazy with Clemont. It was nice .-w- I will vote for Togedemaru as Clemont sixth Pokemon. |
Rogue Deity Master chapter 10 . 6/28/2017 If it's not an over stretch, I have an idea that is sort of a plot twister. The idea will be sent via note so only you can see it |
bloody dragon fang chapter 10 . 6/28/2017 I funny idea that strikes me right now is possibly for a sixth Pokemon for Ash is that Mewtwo tells Ash about an incident in Alola where a poacher was hunting a Lycanrock family. From there when he gets there, Ash beats the poacher but the parents are too far gone to save. Ash gets a Blue Rockruff, either that or sometime in Kalos Ash gets a baby Zorua. |