omg I just saw you haven't added to this story in TOO LONG! I'm so invested in this story I seriously hope you pick it back up and finish it! or maybe pass it along to another writer with some of your ideas? but it really need to be completed, it's too good to be left unfinished! good job! Honestly, such good writing

Could you post another chapter please.

Wow this story is fantastic I hope to see more soon.

Ah! This story is so good! I hope you finish it someday

Willow is being so ridiculously selfish, grr.

On another note, it's been almost 2 years since this was updated. Did you abandon it despite what you said in your little authors note chapter? I can understand if there just hasn't been inspiration for this story, but if you are ignoring it all because of the works you want to publish...

Although your story has time not to be updated, I wanted to tell you that I adore each of its chapters. The plot of the story seems extremely interesting, not to mention the development of the characters (especially Spike and Buffy). Hopefully you can continue one day, because it really is beautiful.

Amo esta historia con todo mi corazon. No se cuantas veces la he leido ya, y sigo pensando que es realmente buena con una trama por demas interesante. Espero que algun dia puedas continuarla, pues deseo mucho poder leer lo que sigue a aprtir de aqui (trato de imaginarlo, pero mi imaginacion no es tan grande no tan genial). Por favor, ojala que alguj dia encuentred algo de tiempo para continuar y concluir esta gran historia. Spike siempre me gusto mucho y me gusta mucho como lo describes en esta historia.
Felicidades por tus libros, espero que te este llendo bien con ellos.

Your dilogue is unreadable. Your characters talk in exposistion only. Try reading it and imagining it's a real conversation. Imagine real people talking like this. It's uberable.

I want to say I'm shocked by willow but I'm not poor spike,

Please continue this fiction. I love this story!

Pretty please with a cherry on top continue with this fic, it’s great can’t wait to see how Buffy acts when brought back with all the horrible stuff the gang and Angel have done. I hope Faith is as pissed as Spike about the neglect of Dawn x

please continue this fiction. it is so amazingly good!

love it

Great going! keep up the wonderful job

Please update soon, I am loving this story. I am really interested to see how this pans out