Wow. This is absolutely brilliant. So much packed into one story! It kept me on edge, I kept sneaking off to the break room at work to read another chapter, I couldn’t put it down! Thank you so much for sharing this, and you are an extremely talented writer!

I don't even know where to start with my response to this. It made me feel so much, brought back some of the traumatic deaths of people beloved to me, my beat friend included,and so many other feelings, of being unwanted, of being so utterly alone, and, beautifully, of finding someone like Harry who is truly supportive and loving. But I didn't find this story triggering. Somehow, despite pulling me in and engaging my emotions so deeply, it feels like a journey I have completed, with bittersweet satisfaction at the end.

Also, I friggen love poetry, so well done with that. Top tier choices.

Very well written!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!
I loved it from the beginning and couldn't read it fast enough.
~Tajala

This story was so good! This was a great murder mystery. I certainly thought I figured out the killer many times but I didn’t see this coming.

Fantastic story.
Thank you for sharing.

I could’ve guessed the ending even if it punched me in the head. Despite the twists, I felt the conclusion was very believable, a fitting apex to several chapters of tension. A wonderful read, with fantastic poetry to boot (and that’s coming from someone who normally loathes the idea of reading poetry). Thanks so much for this eventful and emotional ride

so i got to this chapter and now i simply cant read further. i dont know why, i mean i enjoy this story a ton, even though its very angsty compared to the stuff i usually readand i want to see what happens next but i simply just cant get myself to read more haha... maybe in a few weeks i can finally finish it- ouo
it is really good after all!

IVE BEEN THINKING THROUGH THE WHOLE FIC THAT CAELIX WAS OFF AND IVE BEEN WONDERING IF HE WAS ACTUALLY THE KILLER AND NOW IM SO SURE THAT HE IS

Wow. I usually like a lot more smut and a lot more in character but this kept me reading! The plot was great, I loved your Cae and it was just the right tolerable amount of OOC for me. I was totally suprised who it turned out to be and I loved Wisp! Just great great job!

OMG! WOW! I did not see the end of this one. Never thought of Daphne was the killer. Awesome end. Love it. Thanks for writing it. :)

Mmm... I'm happy they are still together now that the drama has passed. Although I would think he might need counseling after all that trauma.

Well, that was convuluted. No wonder no one could figure things out.

Um... All I can say is WHAT?

Hmm... I know that's not the end. I bet someone else will be after them next.

I'm wondering if that was Caelix exactly because he sounded suspiciously like Blaise.