THESE ARE SOOO. PRRFEEECT

please please update soon I want to know what will happen next

Write the mukami too please.

Maybe you could do one with the same with the bite scene/sex but with the mukamis

Oh, phew! For a moment there, I thought you might put in a Richter chapter.

Salut, j'aime bien ton style d'écriture, et tes chapitres s'accorde parfaitement avec l'animé.
très franchement: bravo, très bon travail.
Mes j'ai quand même une question: tu ne va pas continuer avec la saison 2 ?

Omg this chapter was even more wonderful than the last ones with Ayato. I know the nature of what they're doing isn't consensual, but to read that Yui has come to care a little bit about Ayato specifically is touching. Watching the anime, I always did get the sense that he has deeper feelings for her more than his brothers. The stroking of his hair part was satisfying to read, cause in his route, he asks Yui to stroke his hair.

Will you continue to write more for the Dialovers fandom, or will you move on to another anime once you're finished with Subaru's chapter?

I think, that maybe one last chapter might help sort of act as a 'closure' to this entire fic... like, one of the reasons why I enjoyed reading Added so much is that you wrote it from Yui's point of view, and you've been very consistent with it. So, I think, maybe a final chapter to sort of give us the readers a view of how she has come to see her unique situation (possibly becoming a vampire), getting her rosary back from Ayato, and how she views her future with the Sakamaki? It's up to you ofc, but I feel that if we get a closure chapter like that, it would tie up this entire fic nicely.

Once more, thank you so much for writing this story for us. This fic really gave me something to look forward to.

Way too lazy to sign in but I really wanted to say this.
I really love your work. Good job!

Ack! Creeper Richter! (He'd better keep his hands off poor Yui...)

I feel like Yui is a lot more believable with the way you describe her thought processes versus just the way she is in the anime.

That said...are you purposefully writing rape scenes? Cause these are rape scenes. If this is one of those kinds of fics, then whatever, but you should put a warning in the summary. If that's not what you're trying to do, then you should reread your stuff and maybe you'll see what I'm talking about.

It says in your summary that you think this is how "sex" scenes would go, but none of them would really treat Yui like this. Like, they may bite her without her permission, but they'd coax her into a mood for it first if they were going to have sex with her.

What a great update! Ayato came across so believable; wanting to be in charge but needing emotional connection and comfort too. Poor kids.

Yeah update! Hehe good as always ;) love your writing!

Thank you so much for getting this second ayato chapter out while you're busy with your life and stuff! Omg my ayayui feels are through the roof with this one! It's almost like you can get the sense that he's frustrated that they all have to share her and he finally gets some time alone with her without one of his bros interrupting or getting to her first, and she just doesn't get how he feels. In the anime, I always felt that Ayato had more feelings for her (even though it's kind of odd since we don't see them interacting much for him to build on those feelings, unlike in his route). This chapter was very satisfactory and definitely one of the ones that I was most looking forward to!

I was wondering what you're plans were for when you reach the last chapter?

I haven't read you're fic entirely but I LOVED the 1st Chapter! I was really looking forwardto this kind of fics (because hey, the anime made it all look very rape-y-ish...if that's even a word). You did good! I'll put up another review when I reach the last posted chapter! Ciao!

I like how you wrote the in Yui's mind. But the question that was bugging me was 'Isn't she a virgin?' I know that Yui was in the brink of becoming unconscious but she still should have experienced pain when she and Ayato 'did it'. Just saying.