Well heck man.

think that sums up my thoughts rather nicely. He's been teetering on the edge, it'll be interesting to see where he goes next.

10/10 writing by the way. Can hardly wait for more!

This story is so good.

I've really enjoyed this, and would be v dissatisfied with that as an ending. I hope you continue it.

I'm really enjoying this. Masterful, so far. Such a fun Loki.

Awesome

awwwwww dammit loki

This is absolutely brilliant. Your characterizations are spot-on, and I absolutely adore them. Loki feels perfect in personality (at least for this AU) and everyone else also feels pretty in-character (though I’ve never watched Agents of SHIELD). The plot thus far has been great, with perfect amounts of action and drama. Your grammar is also nice, making this very easy to read. I like the style of the excerpts (I think my favorite ones are from Loki’s journal). This chapter was so awesome and I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Wow I couldn’t stop reading this story. Really loved how you interwove Loki’s younger self’s thoughts into the main storyline via his private journals. I liked your style of writing as well, it was very refreshing. Hope to read more from you.

Oh man, that meeting was worse than I expected — chapter 30 shook me. Awesome writing man

I was thinking of this story just a day or two before you posted this chapter! A coincidence I love :))

And wow, this chapter, just wow. I've been looking forward to this reunion since I started reading this, and what a storm it was. The storm of emotions, the storm that is Loki, raging and lashing out, and the storm of the brothers' interaction that left the helicarrier in a mess- which, by the way, I really expected Loki to clean up. Or, you know, save Agent Roberts who fell out through the hole he made? Hope she's ok :/ Gotta say, I wish Steve hadn't left, at least then he'll try to defend Loki and get Thor to stand down, even though he knows he's been lied to. Also, bless you Nat for trying to calm Loki down, sorry he was an ass tho xD

Now for amazing moments!

"In the steady state of freefall, you can almost forget the inevitable end." Gosh, the power in this phrase, the suspense and foreboding, they just attack and astound me.

"Thor is moored on that Bridge, he realizes in a flash. Just as Loki is. They are both stranded in that world-defining moment, when he chose to fall, the singularity that has warped every other second of his life, cast a pall on his birth and childhood, shaded every word he has spoken to his mother and brother and father into a strange color. The moment that formed Lukas Eld from the Void, his own personal shadow." THIS ENTIRE CHUNK HITS ME SO DEEEEEEEP :'(((( Poor Thor and Loki

PS: Sorry the review took me so long, I was on holiday!

Oh wow, I was not expecting that! Loved it all the same tho!

END OF PART 2?! Omg! That was incredible and amazing and I don't even know what to do with myself! You are an incredible story teller and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing and I hope you update soon!

Oh noooo lukaaassss lokiiiii nooooo... god its a cliff hangerrrr... lukas just wanted to start newwww...
Pfff wait till steve and tony hear about this, and what about bruce?

The character conflict within Loki/Lukas. It's crazy deep. Oh the emotions are overwhelming and tugged at my chest. This scene is written so perfectly. In the character's fear and panic and confusion of identity he acted recklessly with none of the others present understanding his inner turmoil. That last moment literally stopped my breath as your description painted such clear image in my mind. I've fallen in love with this fanfiction. It's really brilliant!

FINALLY! The moment that I've been waiting for ages: Thor and the others find out the truth of Lucas/Loki! The meeting went so messy and frustrating, but not unexpected. Loki's conflict, Thor's longing, SHIELD agents and avenger-to-be's reactions, and Loki's twisted way of solving his own problems. I loooove them all!

Poor Loki, though. Anyway, where does he land this time? ...Please don't tell me he's with Thanos :((