Any updates on this?

Cold blooded Dayne! Although the was partially right in doing so

Impressed with seeing Ned with a backbone yet still pretty easy of a push over

Just binge the story pretty interesting and I enjoyed it, please continue

This is a great story so far, and next chapter featuring Jon is sure to be great. It'll be interesting to see how Jon ends up with Ghost.

Also, The Darkstar seams to have extremely high ambitions, so it'll be very interesting to see what you have planned for him.

I'm also excited to see how Jon and Ned get along when Ned confronts Jon, or Jon reveals himself to Ned.

Great story so far ser!

BS, Arthur wouldn't let their king be named 'Jon', he'd be given a Targ name

Definitely since chapter 8 it only gets better. I'm truly taken now. hope you update soon as I can't wait to see what happens to Jon. Personally, I think this time Robb will find himself King to bow to.

So far it was good read but I see no point in starting your story from trident. to fully understand what's going on a reader must be familiar with the events happening, but if he is, there is no need to write about them. Imo chapter 8 should be chapter 1 as that's when action actually begins and prior to it nothing (except maybe Dayne killing the handmaidens, as it shows his morals won't stop him to defend the prince) of importance happens anyway.

This was a slow start, but this story has just become way more interesting

greawt update!

Its so cool!

Really glad you updated this story one of my favorites of a song of Ice and Fire. Cant wait to see how Jon and Ser Arthur begin their conquest to reclaim Jon's birthright and how the North,Dorne and the Reach will play a role in that. I know you put Daenerys there with Jon and that is my favorite pairing but I think him marrying someone born and raised among the big families of Westeros would be the better political play and would make the story more interesting. Someone like Margaery or from Dorne would help him alot more than marrying within the family and breaking that Targeryen cycle of incest. Ser Arthur Dayne is my favorite secondary character hopefully his battle prowess can be demonstrated vs the Baratheons and Lannisters.

So Arthur is vehemently opposed to Ned Stark calling Jon his bastard and raising him safely, but he's totally fine with sending him to Highgarden as a bastard. That makes no sense.

Fools..
And i am not interested.. Sorry