Thank you for allowing us to read your story over your shoulder! It was very different, and quite interesting. I know this story has been finished for several years, but I only found it this Summer (2020), when I certainly needed something distracting to read!

OMG so much anticipation for Harry's turn! Love it and very well written!

I’ve been reading HP FanFiction off and on since 2006. I always read
Harry/Ginny. This series was great, though! I loved Draco (a thought I’ve never had before). I’ll be branching out in my HP FanFiction now. Thanks for sharing.

That was they most awkward conversation I have seen you write, and yet it was perfect.

OH WELL DONE!
Very tight writing, lovely read. Dangerous!Sexy Snape, mostly lurking around the edges of the story, right where he should be. I've cast David Bowie in the part, Eighth Doctor Who hair, and acting like an evil Jeeves. .

I've connected to your Harry, he's sincerely weird and adorable. Ethical, a magical proximity generator, impressive when Avataring, a snappy dresser :) Its a good go at world building, and I think you caught the physicality of magic and the truly spectacular laziness of wizards. There's something iconic about your Wizarding world, I hope this ends up on a few 'Top 100 Fanfic' lists.

Dumbledore is entirely off-stage ... I appreciate the fix-it to the casual approach to figurative torture and rape in the OS. That bothered me oh so much, the way those dudes were stripping kids' psyches bare at their leisure. Learning occulamency was too secret to tell anyone outside the cult about Snape's behavior - that's textbook.

I'm not sure you sold me on the Trad cult, but I grew up on Austen and Heyer, and having a more complex social script does make communication efficient. I'm very tired because its like 4am, but I want to know how it ends. I've sacrificed two cups of tea to this story already, and despite being two chapters before the end its all afterglow from here.

Imagine being nudged by a ton of stone. It would be like being hipped against a stall by an intentional horse.

Harry's planted a new breed of poisonous snake in Hogwart's ecosphere, with many new little snakes that haven't made any guarantees about not biting people. He's one-upped Hagrid, since you can at least see the acromants before they get you!

Starting the story off strong, enjoyed them all so far.

I like the way you’re introducing the idea of a contract, far smoother than the other stories.

Great job on your work, loving it!

Thank you for writing. :)

Thank you i loved this! It’s so rare to find a pure blood traditions Harry without being crazy overpowered and cringey

Thanks for the story!
Really interesting, I liked how the mannerism is so much different than any fanfics I read so far.
I'm a little disappointed that there's nothing more on Harry's relationship with Daphne, but well, I can't have all I want!

Great story

This is very well done. Recommended.

It was a beautiful journey! My only regret is that i read this series too quickly(Sometimes skipping a few sentences in anticipation).. It was wonderful and im glad that as an author, you have enjoyed writing this since many authors lose inspiration while writing. I do wonder what happened to Dumbles though... Anyways, im glad i came across this series and i would recommend everyone to read this as well. Cheers:)

/You messed up a little with the exam schedule. A few chapters ago, Harry said that his Runes Exam was three days before the third task. He was almost done with all of them. This chapter, he says that his Rune Exam is the following Wednesday, which makes no sense.

/There's a lot of errors like that throught this story. Some are more minor, but others mess with continuity of the fic. Especially so if you've ever read any time travel fics, or memory manipulation fics.

/I'm going to assume that he hasn't time traveled or had his memories altered and chalk this up to writer error. It's very discombobulating as it disrupts reader momentum.

/Okay, your Third Task looks pretty cool to me.