So far great start to the story. I like the way you were able to take him back in time. I will be following this story.

that was good keep the chapters coming

I hope if you're male you cut off your own bollocks for writing such a shitty chapter and making me regret ever reading this. It felt like a huge waste of time after I read that absolutely shitty Mizuki encounter. You should have skipped the whole fucking thing and said it was like the canon scene and been done with it if you were going to fuck it up that much.

3 update chapters... Not a good sign...

Is Naruto going to show Hiruzen his Kurama Chakra Mode? Might give the old man a heart attack.

I'd prefer Naruto just stick a shiv between Sasuke's ribs... lol.

Okay I like it so far but why the fuck would you ship a little kid with a grown woman and also have a kid have multiple relationships?

So you went back in time, but before said back to the future moment, team seven combined forces to defeat madara and the ten tails, only to bash on Sakura for no other reason to just wanting too, but yea ok, let sasuke off the hook despite Sakura being a better friend overall.

How does he know Kurama is a female fox?

damn you really hate sakura lol

warn us before we waste our effing time dude

really wish u had mentioned that u abandoned this story in the summarytotal waste of my time

So, here's the thing that's bugging me about your plot from chapter 1. The deathgod is returning Naruto so he would be entertained, but at the same time he is telling Naruto to stick close to the original timeline. Seems like he can't make his mind up

are you fucking serious

Oh pooooop.