Hello I was just wondering if you were going to update this story or if it was abandoned. Thank you.

I’d like to start out by saying, what an amazing first sentence. It immediately hooked me on the story. The next sentence drew me even more in. The metaphors and similes in the third paragraph are beautifully written. And that sentence at the end of the first part: “Just like that, the game begins.” It is such a satisfying intro. And then the section following that-I love the way it is written. How you don’t just say what happened, but show what it would look like through the eyes of someone in the story. And then, in the last part of the first chapter, I fell completely in love with your story. There is little in the Harry Potter fandom that I love more than the pain of overworked ministry workers-especially Unspeakables.
Then, in the second chapter, when Angela introduces herself as “Angela the Time Traveler” I fell in love with your OC. I’m really glad that despite how unpopular OC’s can be, you kept her in the story. She really adds something to the plot. Then, when discussing why Angela survived and the robed man didn’t, I love the “dumb luck” option. Magic is so unpredictable, I love when fanfictions point that out. I also really appreciate you giving the meaning of her wand’s wood.
In the third chapter, I really love the ending. All the parts with Fate in them are really interesting.
The dynamic between Angela and Draco just makes me really happy. I hope I get to see more of her with Slytherins.
The sixth chapter means so much to me. The messages it sends-I think everyone needs to hear that. Also, I love the style in which you write the differences in the timeline. I’m not sure how to describe it, but I quite like it. I also love the last part with Fate and Destiny. You make them sound like real people-even if Destiny was barely mentions-instead of just empty figureheads.
This is so cute! It makes me happy to read! Also-I love how you write the twins. And everyone’s reaction to their and Angela’s prank.
Ooh, this is interesting. I had been wondering how much Angela knew of the magical world’s future. I also like how morally gray she’s being. The whole, is it write to steal Ginny’s memories thing. And her using her Slytherin side to make a deal with Lockheart is very interesting.
One thing I noticed in the 9th chapter is that in the first sentence, there is a grammatical error. I think there is supposed to be a comma in there. Other than that, I loved the chapter. I was wondering when Tom Riddle would make an appearance…
Well, I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for taking the time to write this. I loved reading it!

Now that's a twist I didn't see coming...but it actually could be a good one. Tom had the right idea but between Dumbledore and his fanaticism to not die he somehow got sidetracked from trying to change the world legally and politically to murder, death and mayhem. My question is why was he sucked back into the diary? How would a twelve year old help Tom become Minister for magic without Fudge and Lucius and Dumbledore getting in the way? Please update soon!

And now we know why she wants to learn the Obliviate curse. What is she going to do with the diary though?

Poor Filius almost lost his hand to a fork. You know the fact that everyone including the staff being so shocked because three students wore different colours really really does not speak well for the school or it's teachings.

I'm glad that someone is finally standing for Harry Potter. She is a sweetheart and gets right to the heart of the matter. I just hope that Harry doesn't fall back into old practices and eventually takes Ron back as his friend or what Ron constitutes a friend. I'm surprised Dumbledore hasn't stuck his nose into Harry's life once again to deter him from the evil snake and back into the presence of the quintessential light bearing friend lol.

Okay, just wanted to tell you that 1) I love Angela totally and completely. And 2) I cannot wait to see what you do next, because this story is great :)

You know it would make second year just perfect if the first person petrified by the basilisk was Ron...even better if he didn't see the reflection of the eyes but the eyes themselves...not really a fan of Rons so a year of peace from him would be nice lol.

Lol Draco is Gryffendor to the core and he is probably the only one that doesn't see it.

Awww no pinkie twisting and making Flophart look like a fool...at least more of a fool than he usually does.

Lol Angela sounds a lot like Harry if he had had a chance to grow into his personality without ten years of abuse before Hogwarts.

I. Loved. It.
And yes, you DID capture Toms personality quite well! I enjoy this story a lot. It's so cool how a person who KNOWS what's going to happen is changing the past...I wonder what will happen!
Looking forward to the next update! :D

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

This is a very good story! I'm quite curious to see where this is going.

Oh, thiz was great, i haven't see that coming,
Great chapter, please keep post.