| Reviews for Occam's Razor |
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John Smith chapter 1 . 11/24/2019 This is a lovely story with VERY clever writing! I love how in-character everyone felt, even though they were in odd situations. I just loved it! Great job! |
MangoPeanutSituation chapter 1 . 7/11/2017 PERFECT! THIS IS PERFECT LMAO! |
fluffykitty12 chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 SHAVING HAS BEEN PASSED DOWN FOR GENERATION! That is when I lost it! :) |
pupeez4eva chapter 1 . 3/12/2017 Oh my god this was so good! I'm such a huge fan of your Batman fics, so finding out that you also write for FMA (another one of my favourite fandoms) makes me so happy! Hopefully you write more in the future. |
BanditPonyta chapter 1 . 7/18/2016 OMG. This is awesome! One of my favorite parts was actually when Maes asked Roy if he wanted to apologize or what? GAH. Such a nice little character thing that just works for their dynamic. And gosh I love you so much right now. I'm so glad you wrote this. It was funny and all of the character interactions were great! The part with Winry at the end was funny too. Oh, and the part about Roy being a wonderful father! CUTE! That competitiveness he has with Hughes on who Edward should go to was so great! I'm sorry, this review is a rambling mess. I'm just so glad you wrote this. It really brightened my day. I look forward to anything serious you write too, I'm sure it will be great because you seem to have a good grasp of the characters. |
ChoccyMilk chapter 1 . 7/12/2016 OH MY GOD. THE END REALLY GOT ME. |
Attackoneverything chapter 1 . 7/10/2016 I'm not sure some men will get the ending. Being a female I did but... XD Loved it! XD XD Daddy issues XD The office take over scene XD XD |
Puddycat chapter 1 . 7/10/2016 Oh my god, that's hilarious! The awkwardness was spot-on, too. Love it! |
Portrait of a Scribe chapter 1 . 7/10/2016 Oh my gosh. I just fell out of my chair laughing. Thank you so much for making my day! You got everyone perfectly in character, and the subject matter was positively perfect! |
thedancingcrown chapter 1 . 7/10/2016 Heehee, that was cute, and funny, I thought. FMA is what got me into reading fanfiction originally, but I haven't watched the show or read any fic for it in forever, so I can't really comment on your characterisation (although Mustang sounds more or less like I remember him)... I do want to watch the anime again now, though XP I'm supposing you'll write more for FMA in the future? So I'll give a better review then, sorry :( Overall I liked it though :D Thanks for sharing! |