Reviews for Becoming Time
AurelLor chapter 25 . 12/4/2019
Ohh hell she didnt even win against jackal ... sorry I cant read anymore , atleast not now , maybe I will continue after my anger is gone .
AurelLor chapter 25 . 12/4/2019
You give lucy 7 extra years but she is hardly wining against jackal . İf she hold back her strange to not kill jackal that means she is still naive idiot. İf she faced zeref he dont even need a second too kill her if she is that weak . Sorry for if my review is harsh but Im frustrated. I really like your story but you just write like lucy is strong but she is same level as natsu now , no natsu kicked jackal ass more easily. I will say it again , I really like your story but I still dont understand how lucy is strong .
AurelLor chapter 13 . 12/4/2019
Story is great but I dont understand lucys power level . She can summon 6-7 spirts one or two golden in the same time but in a nearly physical fight she didnt gone all out and one magic beam she lost 3/4 of her magic power . Not mantion she dont have the mentality of someone who has a responsibility this big. Well last part is normal but first part really doesnt make sense or I miss something.
AurelLor chapter 9 . 12/4/2019
I really didnt like prophecy , especially sacrifice part .
Ritsuki Kurusawi chapter 32 . 7/7/2019
Ahhh! I loved the chapter! QwwQ
onlytearsnpain chapter 31 . 1/25/2019
Please update! Can’t wait for the ErLu moment!
Guest chapter 31 . 10/31/2018
It's a good thing I decided to reread the book and see more chapters! It was also delighting to see that you've done some editing towards the first chapter up until the nineteenth. I will just have to wait for more chapters to come! Hopefully it'll be soon. This is such an amazing book and I had no problem rereading it again, and I was very happy to see new chapters, although I honestly wasn't expecting that. I wish to read more! Thank you so much for writing this! It's amazing!
Arwen1990 chapter 31 . 7/14/2018
can't wait for more
Naiyz Nae Heartlet chapter 31 . 7/2/2018
ugh... today are just so good isn't it? thank you!
joy.rolo chapter 30 . 5/6/2018
just finally decided to continue/finish watching the anime! and so glad that i did :) anddd here i am on ...what a surprise..not.. hahaha

I can't wait to see the end of this arc and read Erza and Lucy reconnecting after all these years...
AnimeDragin chapter 1 . 10/22/2017
Woah...much math.
Guest chapter 30 . 8/21/2017
That was certainly tough.
I mean, rewriting the whole arc?
I can only imagine how it was like.
But hey, Erza and Lucy will be the endgame.
AminaZaria chapter 30 . 8/20/2017
I like it...I want it end though so we can get to actual ErLu. I think they have both waited long enough and need a a happy ending lol. Looking forward to the rest friend.
AminaZaria chapter 28 . 8/19/2017
I love this. I have to admit I kind of gave up on this story and wrote it off as one of the many great unfinished tales that can be viewed on this site. Welcome back friend...and you return triumphantly. Hope all is well and I look forward to the remainder and subsequent end to this story.
LazuliEva chapter 28 . 8/19/2017
Finally! Erza and Lucy are back together! Yeah! I'm so happy, right now xD I really like this chapter, Lucy finally show up again for her Erza. Now i can't wait for the next chapter!
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