| Reviews for Fate: Heroes of Justice |
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Coeur Al'Aran chapter 1 . 2/25 My readers, I must apologize to you. I have written some HORRIBLE stories and I can not believe you all are sitting here wasting IQ points on this trash heap of a story...m In order to make it up to you I ask you to check out my BEST friends works by fan fic authors "I luvgrace420" and "mr grimjaw". They have AMAZING talent! Drop them a review! |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/6 ‘The Christmas incident’, can’t stop laughing. |
MystiYew chapter 1 . 7/11/2019 Using five commas in a single sentence does not mean that sentence can be an entire paragraph. This is your opening line ffs. A sentence should have 2-3 clauses. Max. |
Jose19 chapter 11 . 6/10/2019 The only issue here is that romantic stuff is nice but as the story progresses the Saber that kicks ass will be needed since she is a woman similar to Diana meaning that there is no damsel in distress. Saber is quite capable of killing Shirou like Diana these two ladies can literally pound you into next week. |
holy crap chapter 6 . 4/19/2019 damn that really got to him"im going to make your whore arturia moan my name"holy shit |
wat chapter 4 . 4/19/2019 nookie...what the fuck is that no wait I don't wanna know |
Guest chapter 15 . 2/23/2019 asshole. |
Guestinator chapter 8 . 5/23/2018 Oh damnit tell me this won't have heroes fighting each other because Kent, after saying himself confusions can happen, doesn't bother to even send a letter about it to his friends. Needless and pointless drama. That is all I am taking away from this otherwise great story. If you believe a child would say something is dumb than it most likely is and needs to not be in a story. |
d chapter 14 . 4/24/2018 you go an die now |
The Immortal Siegfried chapter 14 . 4/9/2018 Sorry to hear what happened I hope you make a full recovery. It is important to keep your health in mind. |
OSR fanatic chapter 14 . 4/9/2018 Hmm. Yo Author-San! How about trying again next year! The lost of Muse can't go on forever. You might want to write this in the near or far future. Just don't take 20 years to get your muse back. :) |
simple405 chapter 14 . 4/8/2018 Thanks for the update. I still look forwards to more. Many stories can be created and be left incomplete, but the process of creation is an essential part of being human so I still look forwards to all of your creations. The shellfish thing sucks though maybe you will see a medical advance for the treatment of allergies in a few years or something. The future moves too fast for me so it may pass by in a flash. |
Remzal Von Enili chapter 14 . 4/8/2018 I’m sorry about your shellfish problem. I’d ask if you could still get the same enjoyment using imitation products but I m unsure if that would trigger another attack. |
Gur40goku chapter 14 . 4/8/2018 Thank you for keeping this story here for your fans and well wishes on a speedy recovery. :) |
ENDDRAGON369 chapter 14 . 4/8/2018 Meh you'll get used to it. I loves shrimp then stopped eating it due to reasons. Just don't get anything shellfish related and go to restaurants with no shellfish. And you'll forget all about it. Plus what you ate was deep fried. I mean come on deep fried shellfish. That would set off alarms to me. And now I'm rambling. Oh well. Hope you Get better and good luck. |