Oh man, that hurt my heart to read. Oh geez. This was really good, but boy I am crying now. But yeah, no, really great job.

This was good! I've been wondering about Pidge's mom a lot, and what her reaction was to not only her husband and son going missing, but then her daughter too. I really like what you've written about her!

So good! I love the confusion and grief. I love how you have this from Mrs. Holt's perspective. Well done!

A really nice take on pidge's mom toughts about this, I always wanted to know what she tought when the paladins went to the space, and I always have been wondering if she even knew about what pidge was going to do -probably yes, but nobody can be sure.
I love this, this is really well written! Please write more!
(I still want to see what would happen when they come back to the earth with the lions)

This was really good. I know how getting news of a loved ones passing can be horrible and I can't imagine getting it second hand like that. Well done.

Will there be continuation with them coming back to earth and little happiness?!
We deserve little hapiinrs'

My heart dropped down to my stomach. I can't even imagine losing all of one's family members in less than a year. This was heartwrenching and heartbreaking. Oh how the mother must've felt.. I hope the Holt family can be completed by the end of season 2 or something.. Oh gosh I'm crying..

Great one-shot! I think I saw this on AO3 too! :)

I should tell you, you put the WRONG language label on! You label your story with "Esperanto"! The RIGHT label is "English"! You should fix that!

Thank you for taking my fragile heart and smashing it into pieces! This was sorta like a slow realization, I actually wasn't expecting the ending tbh. Great job, however! This was really well executed and written!

Have a blessed day!

Can you do a fanfic where Katie gets a hold of her mom or something like that?

I liked the feeling put into the story, but also the idea that Gunderson is the mom's last name, explaining where Katie got the name from. That said, there are a few formatting issues. At one place the spacing between two paragraphs was lost, and a couple of the paragraphs were on the large size, which stood out because of the size of the other paragraphs.