Enjoying this so far. Hope it continues

Update soon!

Keep it up!

You’re doing great, keep updating and I’ll keep reviewing :D

Keep up the awesome work!

I don’t understand your review count...this fic is well thought out and just amazing!

Keep it up!

Love the story so far!

Keep up the good work!

Heh heh the ultimate technique only Jiraiya can with stand

There are many weird things here. Why would you call Iruka "Enkai" rather than "Umino" for example? Why would "Teuchi" become "Tenchu"?

In the same way, how did Mizuki escape the Hokage, "the strongest warrior in Fire Country"? Like, Hiruzen should have pasted him, no?

The application process to become a ninja seems very, very haphazard. You say Konoha is primarily a ninja village. Wouldn't the goal be to maximize enrollment? Especially when it comes to the frigging secret son of the Fourth Hokage? Also, Naruto lives alone? At twelve? He has no family name, no guardian, no money, nothing? I know he lived alone in canon and was broke but if you want to go down a more logical road, it's not a very good move.

And of course, Danzo wants to execute Naruto as soon as Kyuubi rears its head.

It feels weird to me, the weirdest being the name modification. It feels like change for the sake of it.

Best,

Great job on the story,please update as soon as you can thanks

This is great! Loving it! Oh do I also love how much character development narutos gotten! Next chapter plz! Lol great work.

Yo, that was fucking rad. I'm so glad you're still working on this, because you've already made so many improvements on the original. Hope life gets better for you, friend.

nice bridging chapter. like you said, not much happenong here that is different, but still necessary to move the story along. like how you had sakura protect him there, making her a lot more involved in the story than the original. plus as great as saskue can be. its nice to see he is not the only one with the last monent heroics.

and i am totally ok with shorter chapters if that means more of them! cant wait for the next one!

Why Naruto is better than you think: threads/the-naruto-reread-thread.358836/

I like what you're doing with this, and I am enjoying how you are setting everything up. I look forward to the next chapter.

great chapter! slightly annoyed that naruto needed saskue to rescue sakura like that, hopefully that doesnt become a thing. too many great stories end up annoying the crap out of me for making naruto into this dufus and saskue the great hero.

i personally like what your doing here, trying to make it more believable. only down side is how long it takes to update, but life has a way of slapping us around, especially with a past time that is ultimately not a priority in the slightest. oh well, keep it up and looking forward to the next update!

wow, interesting! like the fight scene with Sakura, and Kakashi's little speech afterwards. wouldn't mind some more background for naruto, and it seemed odd that Sakura made no comment about him being an orphan. still, you got them in character and just overall well done. cant wait for the next update!