| Reviews for Gravitale-UnderFalls |
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  Maggie chapter 13 . 12/29/2019 Wow, this Alternate universe is very interesting. It's Detailed, Descriptive, and sticks with the Characters. It makes me want to watch more! |
 Dogybobet chapter 13 . 8/29/2019 I love this |
| NBoss01 chapter 13 . 5/3/2019 Hey.. new reader here... Just gonna leave my review... I would like to say something positive here... But I can't find that much here thats good... Just take this into account. Do you realise that the black and white fight screens in the game are an atmospheric design of the game than a plot driven aspect. The Dipcifica feels quite shallow. Pacifica's character is shallow. Mabel acts more too childish and here characterization is bad. Dipper and Mabel's age up has introduced no new changes to the fic, the feel and act younger than they are in the show. Alot of the Undertale game play aspects interrogated into a serious story just ruins the vibe and seriousness of the fic. The whole 4th wall thing is just...no. Fix those things and your story will drastically improve. |
| Snowwing chapter 13 . 11/4/2018 In this story, can Gaster "break the fourth wall?" |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/1/2018 ... dude... was that.. fuckING GASTER?! |
| Anonymous chapter 13 . 9/28/2018 Awesome, hope your surgery goes well, and stay determined :) |
| Katoptris12 chapter 13 . 8/30/2018 Wow, I didn't think a little glitch would cause all this! Why would our little cinnamon roll papy do this? |
| Minhaz chapter 13 . 6/16/2018 Do more!This is great! |
| That One Cute Kitty chapter 12 . 3/24/2018 Oh, and what's up with Papyrus being all dark Fell!Papyrus? Its Bill's influence isnt it? That's why his eyes were closed! Cause they were YELLOW! |
| That One Cute Kitty chapter 13 . 3/24/2018 Recover from your surgery! And I would LIKE to help but I don't have Dichord... And oh, what's up with everyone having ,like, personality swaps? Papyrus, I don't think, is that dark about the humans and Sans, well, is good in a different way. Is Flowey still working with Bill? Does Chara know about their deal? Probably not, but just asking. And Toriel's personality was beautiful. |
| AppleBagelUnicron chapter 13 . 3/4/2018 Wow, I didn’t expect this to be that good. You really surprised me. I have 2 complaints though. 1) it is a bit too similar to the original game, but after the Toriel thing it was better. 2) I know you are probably going though a lot of crap right now, but I would really like to see more of the story. |
| The Meme King chapter 12 . 1/12/2018 Badger? Are you okay? Everything is all right |
| The Meme King chapter 11 . 1/12/2018 We are here for you... Take a break... We'll still be here. Happy. Have a |
| The Meme King chapter 9 . 1/12/2018 Gaster...CHARA...Asriel...So much...Great story! |
| The Meme King chapter 8 . 1/12/2018 good |
