Super adorable. Normally not a a fan of stories under 5k words because they don’t pack a punch. However this one was very nicely written and you got just enough to be satisfied. Well done.

You did a lovely job with this.

I loved this - you stayed so true to both characters. Kel's thoughtfulness and Dom's quiet good humor were both captured beautifully. I think that your writing could use a bit of light editing - nothing big, just punctuation stuff - but well done!

Kel/Dom. (Happy sigh) Thank you!

Awww, so perfectly in character in for of them. And logical, exactly how Kel would be. Such sweet sappy fluff makes me happy. :)

I liked your story. I loved it in the books how the soldiers and her friends always helped and stood up for kel like that.

This is incredibly well written. It keeps everyone in character but also allows for some playfulness. This fic really made me smile. Thank you for sharing it.

Very cute, made me smile

There can never be too much Kel Dom in the world. Never. Everyone has a different take and some are really different, others follow a similar pattern but I like this. Short and sweet while keeping it realistic. Good job.

I like that you made kel think for a bit before deciding her answer. it seems like something she would do, it's a great one shot!