Reviews for Overwatch: Duty Towards The Future |
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![]() ![]() It seems Dark Drive is possible appear here I think? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, not bad for a lucky break eh, Berx? So either you're looking for/building a character for the Special Shift-Car or it's just a way to say Mach can and will find a way? :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...you updated in mass this time 0.0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha Cody can't be this dumb to just allow himself to be cryogenically frozen |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is running at Top Gear! :D Now to add a jet-powered warhammer wielding crusader into the mix! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Small correction for French. We do not say "vous ĂȘtes le bienvenu" for your welcome in general . But 'De rien". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for not reviewing for a long while. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dead-Heat is inbound! Wooooo! Did you just seriously mention Bob The Builder? That's something you don't hear everyday, let alone Spud... Give me a break, I like that scarecrow. Okay don't take it seriously, but don't you think tough and brooding is a little cliche in your stories? I know it's for drama, but I almost feel like poking Chaser's button and break the fourth wall whenever I read about a dude takes stuff seriously and and be all brooding, like Batman or CW's Arrow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey you still planning on making that Winx Club Story cause I really want to see how that goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work, like the appearance of Deadheat in this chapter, also like the first fight with it, in this chapter too. I can't wait to see what's next. |
![]() ![]() So Cody(OC) and Krim heads back to the ruined Drive Pit in Forgotten Era to retrieve Deadheat Shift, Special/Next Shift & Shift Tridoron & Mach-Deadheat debut was the next chapter. I don't know if Chase alive or captured or Overwatch team survives or yet captured. My predictions are Cody & Krim reunites Chase and Overwatch team, then Mach-Deadheat debut & build a new Oberwatch base. Another is what if Shinnosuke Tomari/Drive's son shows up the heroes? The real Eiji Tomari, not Paradox or he maybe the next Drive which is Dark Drive? Just my own predictions or idea. No offense. Okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hidden bases should be kept under raps, last I checked. But that might not imply seeing this is your story. :P But on a side note, hope to see the aftermath of the base and what REALLY happened to Chaser. I could make a suggestion for you, on how Mach and Tracer's relationship could work out, but I doubt you'd want to hear me out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You want to introduce a one-off villain after this? You stupid or what? I never liked one-off villains to begin with and you want to do this now after Talon attacked just so you can have an excuse to keep having Talon become a legitimate threat? Yeah, you must be smoking cocaine or something to think you can actually get away with shit like this without some feedback. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice one my man this is a pretty good chapter you got here, not bad at all. I can't wait to see what's next. Best of luck on your next update. Keep up the good work. |