Had to be done? I don't get why people bother writing fanfics if all they are going to do is copy paste the script with a few dialogues mixed in? Makes people miss the real fanfics who actually have story

Hello, I am just starting your story and while I don't mind(obviously I don't since I don't own doctor who) making money off this site and fanfics is illegal, so you might want to put up a disclaimer saying you don't own it atleast.

All my hate

Typical Jack, flirts without knowing the consequences

I KNEW IT

...the irony of talking about dancing and saying ‘I wanna come with you’ ... I’ve been reading about Jack way too long

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I think I know who ‘Rick’ is ...

Lol I finally know why

Revenge, a dish best served once forgotten

I think the ‘oh Yes’ is more of the reason why Doc doesn’t like young one

I’ve been rewatching old Who with my mom and dad, I had to come back and read this. Looking forward to the next adventures!

A preview of The Empty Child. Totally awesome.

The whole has been screwed up in the last hundred years. Just like game station 5. The Doctor is in trouble. And so is Eva. Except she has an assignation with an unknown party. Let's see what happens with her.

Interesting how forgetting everything is the solution to mind control. It's nice how Jack and Eva have reconnected. It's actually quite sweet. A psionic entity was destroyed by a little memory loss. Many people would like to forget some of their bad memories. But those memories are part of who we are. Deleting them would irrevocably change up. Losing them is the stuff of nightmares.

Is Adam perhaps an incarnation of the Master? I don't know about any of this stuff. It does make sense that Eva would remember about all this. Please let them snap out of it. The main question is why would this Adam mess with their lives?
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