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luke is a moron

Im reading chapter 11 while listening to the last part of the duel of the fates by John Williams symphony orchestra, It is my fate

Good story.

This was awful.

Well that was retarded. What's the point of having Anakin in this story? Fucking trash.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Having just come out of a period of reading the excellent,but poorly typed, redemption stories of a favourite author who doesn't receive criticism well, I’m afraid my inner grammar nazi is about to emerge. I will apologise in advance and hope you receive my observations will more grace than she.
The phrase you're looking for is 'all intents and purposes' not intensive purposes. It's a common mistake and when spoken it does sound like 8ntensive but I’m sure you'll agree it makes no sense. Otherwise well written. This is my second time of reading.

Esta muy bueno el fics más como luke encontro a su padre congelado más que sucedió en la misión más el fin del emperador y vader más que salvo a luke

If Vader survives the 2nd death star... that's going to make an already weird coming together family dynamic even weirder

I'm rather looking forward to the Vader vs Anakin confrontation

The pieces were all there but nobody has ever put them together like this. Great work.

Desserts get cold at night. Maybe Luke stayed indoors after sunset?

And before anyone says, "But Tatooine has two suns, so there should never be night!" I'll point out that they are shown as being both in the sky at the same time, close together, which means they would both be below the horizon together. Basically, the only reason there *are* two suns - is to highlight how unearthly that world is, as if the aliens weren't enough - they illuminate the planet much like a single star would.

Also, instead of "frail old man," can I suggest "frail old Jedi," because Yoda isn't exactly human ;)

Also consider: "Come young Skywalkers!" because Anakin and Luke are both Skywalkers, and both young :)

Interesting Story.

Amazing. I couldn't stop reading this fic. The plot, the characters, the scenes. Wow. I loved it.