Reviews for As Dawn Broke
Guest chapter 12 . 1/23
Oh boy, where do I even start with this chapter's review?
First, can I get a loud applaud for Donald? I'm so proud of him for standing up to Mortimer, defending Daisy and revealing his true self.
Then, I'm glad Mickey learned a few things. I'm sure he'll get better as a prince from now on.
The scene between Daisy and Minnie could be considered cliche, maybe sweet but for me, it was something that actually hit me incredibly close to home. Somewhere after this line: "Why is being the real me so horrible? Am...Am I really that awful to be around?" I started crying, and all because these words express what I've felt for years, always pushed away, rejected, ignored and even bullied, never knowing why and always feeling just so, so lonely. Not always having a best friend like Daisy does, unfortunately. But it's great that she has Minnie and that all is out in the open now.
Panchito's past is sad indeed. Poor guy.
And finally, Goofy! In this story he's definitely my favorite character and this chapter only cemented him as such. First him comforting Mickey and then his scene with Milli! He's so awesome here.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/23
Wow. Epic chapter, probably the best so far. Goofy is the real hero in this story and I absolutely love it!
I hope Mickey finally learned his lesson... He's been way too selfish for a future ruler of the kingdom. Maybe it'll finally start changing.
GuardianAngel1234567 chapter 13 . 11/26/2017
Jerk.
GuardianAngel1234567 chapter 7 . 11/25/2017
Oh Horace. ;)
GuardianAngel1234567 chapter 3 . 11/25/2017
Oh great. Out of the grapevine yet.
GuardianAngel1234567 chapter 2 . 11/25/2017
Aww. Where's the villains?
Unknown user chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
Does this fanfiction remind me of that romance between Earth's own Prince Darien and the moon's own Princess Serena?
ShannonAllAround chapter 16 . 4/20/2017
Wow. What a story! That was such a wild, fantastic ride. Very very well done. Now that it's done I'm just sitting here slightly breathless!
ShannonAllAround chapter 13 . 4/20/2017
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHdies *
ShannonAllAround chapter 12 . 4/19/2017
YES MICKEY CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! I've been waiting for this and am so happy for Mickey! Oh, bless his little heart.
Alicorns chapter 16 . 12/28/2016
that was amazing. this story is so great, not even words describe how great it was
sonicxjones chapter 16 . 11/29/2016
Naw
Mighty Agamemnon chapter 15 . 11/6/2016
Oh, I love how Donald was able to fight off Pete! Nice! But I'm glad that Pete was able to change in the end. And awww, Minnie was able to learn that her mom loved her! And yay! Goofy got his happy ending!
DemonicK chapter 16 . 10/30/2016
Lovely! It's been awesome seeing this come together over the years, from story bits to being realized in full. :) Thank you so much for all of your work and for choosing to share it with us!
Mighty Agamemnon chapter 14 . 10/13/2016
Wow.. Minnie was harsh to Daisy. And awww at Donald and Daisy.

But hmmm it's extremely hard to not think of Donald as a warrior when he's the one always getting into fights. His tutor role doesn't really fit him. And then why would his temper cause fear if he supposedly can't back it up with action in this universe?

Here's holding out the hope that someday in some fic, he'll be just as badass as Mickey and Goofy seem to be in these.
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