Reviews for The Mistake
roganjalex chapter 11 . 4/7/2012
veery touching end
sfbxfcb chapter 11 . 2/9/2012
Wonderful!
HELENz chapter 11 . 8/16/2009
Very nice ending. Well written.
Anmanda chapter 11 . 11/24/2008
This was a great chapter! I think it was a nice ending to the story...and was definitely worth the wait:)
OneDayTheRobotsWillCry chapter 11 . 11/9/2008
That was really great! I love this story!
Lainielove7 chapter 9 . 6/24/2008
Very good job! You seem very busy, but I was wondering if that was the end of the story or if you were going to write more. I am curious to see what is going to happen. I hope everything works out!
nicoleag245 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
it was sad but a great plot it kept me reading until the end
Daisyangel chapter 9 . 6/11/2007
This is an interesting story. Do you ever plan on continuing it? I hope so, cause I can't wait to see what happened to Josh.
LilyXJames chapter 9 . 12/26/2006
oh my god what happened to josh!

please update soon

i have to know what going to happen to them

LilyXJames
Airia Black chapter 9 . 9/9/2006
Very good. You left us on such a cliffie. Update soon.
Amanda chapter 9 . 8/28/2006
Update soon! This story is great!
dumbblonde76 chapter 9 . 8/21/2006
*gasp!* please write more soon!
Ms.HellFire-ffacnt chapter 8 . 7/28/2006
Wow what a story. Seriously heart breaking, I LOVE IT! Now I know it's been nearly two years since your last update and I promise you any excuse short of you being six feet under the ground in a wooden box I simply will not except.

Lots of Luck with ridding the Writer's Block.

Kisses,

4590
Zoe chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
This is my favorite BMW fic. Please update!
Shadow-Hawk Opal chapter 8 . 9/18/2005
Okay, so it's bound to get better from there. This is pretty good. Normally I don't leave a review, but I hate nasty cliffhangers, and I want you to update.

Shadow.
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