Amazing fic. It's the largest 2-chapter fanfic I've ever read. The story is amazing and lovely, I could feel the story as if it was music. It rushes up your nerves and makes you feel alive; I'm just speechless, there's no way I can describe what the fic made me feel, but if I had to say something close to it it's: Alive. Keep up the WONDERFUL job, and best of luck! Read you in another story

I. Am. Speechless. I just can't-. This is probably the largest chapter I've ever read in a fic and I love it. Amazing job.

This is definitely my favorite Yatori fanfic. I had to come back and reread it!

This was so sweet, the characters were perfect in their innocence and deep love. thanks for writing it!

I regret that I have but one fave to give for this fanfic...

I stayed up for 2 hours reading this... it's 2am...I loved this it was great, I swear I could see it all happening in my head. you're awesome keep it up

This is by far my favorite Yatori story! Very well written, and you kept all the characters as themselves which makes it even better! Thank you for taking the time to write and post this! 3

I wish I could mark this story as favourite more than once. So intense, full of love, perfect development, it made my heart ache.

I wouldn't mind a continuation of this! 3

That was such a great story! So well written and well paced. It was really a really great read and I loved all ththe scenes. There were a few grammar errors like he instead of she and vice versa, but other than that it was a really beautiful story. I wish it didn't have to end lol

I love that you wrote a realistic and healthy lemon with consent and talking. I hate the ones written by people who obviously don't have any experience nor understand what sex really is.

That was a really hot chapter! I loved how hiyori doesn't feel pain during the act. A lot of authors think women have a hymen that needs to be broken during their first time and in reality the hymen is pulled away when the woman is sexually aroused, which means women normally doesn't feel pain, and only 1 out of 200 bleeds (because the hymen is in the way if the woman is not sexually aroused) So thank you for that lemon, it was very refreshing, having it being so realistic!

I love this so much! Thank you for writing such a good story with this pairing!

3 3 3 absolutely loved this.

wow I loved this so much! feeeeeels! so beautiful!