... a Sirius joke in Japanese? that's trying way too hard.

Interesting. Not sure if it's intended or a typo, but you have a female (judging by all the pronouns and physical description) going by Gabriel (Male name) when I think you meant it to be Gabrielle (female version)?

ugh, too many fem-harry ideas. I don't read female harry fics.

I would like to point out that Fleur's sister was given the *female* version of Gabriel, Gabrielle.

I'm guessing this is based on Gabriel Herrol's latest challenge...

noce

You could do one more of responses. Maybe a little backstory as to why Harry if you could make it interesting enough.

Good intro.
Well, what you could do is do a follow up with how other factions and importent people in the Nasuverse react on the knowledge that Moon is back.

niice

Ah, that's a shame. This was an interesting idea.

But it makes sense, an OP-character is exceptionally hard to write an interesting story around.

Not enough people appreciate Tsukihime. I loved the manga.

Just have him start off with him coming into his powers, and gradually coming to realise how to use them. Also...Fou!

I haven't watched this anime yet but it looks interesting, as well as this story. Hope you continue it, good anime/HP fics are rarely finished.

This is honestly one of the more interesting stories that I've seen.

You know just going for a OP Harry story and blowing through any opposition works pretty well for this type of story.