So bittersweet. I like it, though I'm glad you went with the other ending for your main fic.

This is so nicely written and ya know for the longest time i was a hundred percent sure that's how you were going to end the book

This was amazing too. I love both versions though I think I prefer this one, because Mordred is at peace and I'd love to find out more about what the people in Avalon think of everything.. Like Uther, and Mordred meeting Merlin's father. Are Ygraine and Balinor friendly? Probably sounds a little silly, but still it's an interesting concept that's not really done.

Fun idea!

I can't help but re-read this. well done.

While I am sad that Mordred is dead in this alternate ending, I really like the way that you told this story. It makes sense for the Triple Goddess to appear in such a special place to 3 such important figures. I also really like the scene with the knights at the end. :)

This is beautifully written. It gives us all hope of a different kind.
Thanks for sharing your gift of creativity with us.

have you tried posting on ao3?