| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of the Gamer |
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I Judicator chapter 4 . 7/28 Yay! Panther!Harry sweet! |
lou2003us chapter 4 . 7/28 I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
Harry Cullen 321 chapter 4 . 7/28 I have just finished my first read through of this story and it is incredible on par with harry potter and the game by concept 101. Hope for more of this incredible story soon. Thank you for adding to this amazing genre. |
Tenjo chapter 4 . 7/27 I’m not really a fan of how much emphasis is put on Dumbledore... I genuinely think the story focuses on him MORE than it does on Harry, if you exclude the excessive number of status windows that is. One of the big appeals with stories like this are the secrecy, but they’re already on his trail and he’s done next to nothing yet. I’m also not a fan of the accidental animagus trope. If it were possible accidentally there’d be way more of them and even then, in this instance it makes no sense. You tried to make it do so by mentioning the food chain, but he wants to show them HE is above them... how does that translate to “turn me into an animal”? It doesn’t. Not only that, now the animagus thing which is an even more useful secret (as it can actually be used against him) lost that buff literally as soon as it happened; the ministry already knows about it. I was interested because other people who do these stories can’t write for their life; you can, but the story itself is hard to like. |
D.Mentor chapter 4 . 7/26 Another great chapter, thank you for writing. |
Epicboss67 chapter 4 . 7/26 Hmm I wonder of he's going to get a skill called Obliviate Resistance where the more he gets oblivoated the easier it is to resist it. I also wonder if he's going to get a notification that tells him he got obliviated. |
NodMPortant chapter 4 . 7/25 Things are starting to pick up I see, was expecting there to be a whole epic quest to rid Harry of the shard. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
Blueowl chapter 4 . 7/25 Glad Harry is advancing and got rid of that shard. Cool to see a Dumbledore figuring things out and thanks for not bashing senselessly. As for the end, interesting turn of events. I suppose it makes sense he'd snap. Someone can only take so much, tho surprised it took this route as there was no indication I'd go this way. Anyway, looking forward to more. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/25 He should have never been left with those monsters anyway... They better either Read the Dursleys mind or give them truth serum. After all Harry only did to them (but less) what they did to him. |
gpeckman1 chapter 4 . 7/25 I'm guessing that the Unique Soul Shard was actually the piece of Voldemorts soul that got stuck in Harry. It would be hilarious if that's the case. |
Yoto chapter 4 . 7/25 Bon chapitre |
Shodaime Gahokage chapter 4 . 7/25 oh I know the pain of renovation my doorframes where full wood now its cardboard and I striped some while moving throught them clumsily. and there I don't mean "I moved furniture though and the furniture cliped the frame" I mean "my shoulder shorn some of the frame" the wood structure shift with the season and there are cracks developing in the walls and some doors don't lock during the inter-seasons because the frames and doors get unalined |
TimothyB chapter 4 . 7/25 Really enjoy this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
TealovingSpider chapter 4 . 7/25 Thanks for the great chapter and the only thing i kinda hope or wish not to see is Dumbledore or Flamel knowing about his "special ability". The animagus Formokay but not more. I really hate it when the MC is too trustworthy with people he doesnt know or will have ulturior motives. And we know that Dumbledore has ulturior motives...(the prophecy). Also please make him cunning later on. Now again thanks for the chapter and have a nice Weekend |
embrewing chapter 4 . 7/25 not a fan of the accidental animagus crap, it's so overused and boring. |