Reviews for Naruto - Life as a Devil
Guest chapter 20 . 6/18
Are you going on a hiatus?
Dasgun chapter 20 . 5/21
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matze3 chapter 20 . 5/12
Overall a good chapter and the fight scenes aren't a problem or lackluster in my opinion.

However there are 2 things to which i can only raise my eyebrows and ask for an explantion:
First Naruto providing a folder about his skills which includes the domination over time. Like seriously? Didn't he want to keep this little thing as a secret trump card? He might not have written his profiency but as far as i understand from the Naruto now he is more like a ninja which means concealing things instead of shouting about his great skills to god and the world. Which handing this information over for the match basically is.

And the second is about the holy sword Naruto's peerage just carried to this event. Just why? Apparently she isn't going to fight so why bring the sword? And Sebas and the other old devil servants wouldn't let them out of the house with the hint on hiding that some can use holy weapons. That's supposed to be a secret that has to be kept above else because it means some aren't affected by light elöement like normal devil. Preventing the restart of the great war with Naruto's peerage as the first battle line seems to be pretty important. More important then someone carrying the sword around just to show of
agnar chapter 19 . 5/1
Just re-reading this while hoping for an update, *wink wink*. And was curious why Lily hasn't gone after at least the Nightmare fragment in the year since she was given the other 4 pieces, just to make sure it was in safe hands.

I saw DxD canon had no one as wielding Blessing, so I guess you're planning maybe Irina to have it, since her canon fragment is now in Lily's hands, or I suppose some other potential canon DxD character. I didn't figure on Xenovia since she had Durandal ( who carries a back-up, fully powered holy sword?), but I suppose you might go a non-canon path with even Kiba and save him from the Excalibur program thing and make him a wielder.

And I get her not going after Arthur just yet, she'd likely want as much of Excalibur joined up first anyway as Ruler is the strongest piece on its own. But just wasn't sure why they'd leave Nightmare kinda just hanging out there on an island, up for grabs by anyone.
chm01 chapter 20 . 4/29
You know, Naruto could just open the portal for a while to let some Pokemons into his territory, I am pretty sure other devils regardless of rank would be interested, a good source of funds and favors, though that might get him in a bit of a problem if someone try to get as a familiar. Just a thought.
Ashkan Dehno chapter 20 . 4/18
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
savitarsurffer chapter 2 . 4/18
Are you going to get Basilisk serious?
not because I am against it but because I can't wait to see them in this fic
you are sensational as a writer and I hope it stays that way
ElementalMaster16 chapter 20 . 4/6
Very cool chapter! I rather liked the fight scenes. Well, I might say that I don't quite get the last one, but that's more to do with Naruto's state at the end. Would you mind explaining why Naruto is so affected? Is it always like that, or was this more because he had to fight for control against another user of time?

Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)
lou2003us chapter 20 . 3/31
I loved the chapter. it made me laugh so hard. I definitely needed that after this week. I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work boss!
Reader chapter 20 . 3/30
Just started and finished the whole story today and I think it's really good
Grounded Forever chapter 20 . 3/29
You really need to actually loo up the definition of insanity, you keep giving the one Einstein said which is nearly completely wrong
Prototype10987 chapter 15 . 3/29
Yo no joke its different n unexpected i enjoy that so keep doing what u do
Juvia Locksar chapter 20 . 3/29
AWESOOOOOOOME. You are an angel in this kind of situtaion. You never know how much you Authors and your writing gave our little happiness back. I dont care who you are. My God bless you with all the best this world can over.
Thank You so much.
Keep Healthy
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29
“Don’t like don’t read” well ok then I didn’t read and I can already tell it’s garbage from this insecure statement. You think you can stop criticism just because you put that little snip there?
Major Simi chapter 20 . 3/29
well nice chapter good battle scenes. keep going
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