Please use less cuss words

THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL!

I really loved your detail and the way it was written. I think you described the situation perfectly. I hope you write more like this because it was good. You ended it pretty well so don't feel eh xD

This was really good! Well done :)

Enjoyed it! I'm glad they got James to the hospital in time & finally made up!

This was amazing and very well thought through. The ending was really good. So glad Kendall decided to listen to his friends and become a better friend. TB is a very serious disease and glad they all caught it in time. Very good story.

You did a wonderful job at this! You portrayed everything beautifully in this. Now my dad had TB and I think he had the latent one because he showed nothing at all! Thankfully he's alright now :) I can't wait to read more from you!

This was really good! I love jagan bromacne and Logan angst especially, so this was right up my street. I think you also played it out really well with all the detail and the development of the illness, and the backstory added a lot to the plot as well. Well done and please keep writing!

Excellent portrayal of how tuberculosis works. So glad to see that you included the drugs that are used to treat it as well as the recovery. great job!

Okay, so, first of all... I really love how you included bits from a few of the episodes into this one-shot. I really liked that. :) The one-shot, overall, was amazing. I'm really glad you decided to give this a shot, because you did a really good job with it all. From the boys' characterization, to everything that happened, it was all really well-written, and I really enjoyed it. Great job. :)