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himmelblu chapter 129 . 5/23 Hi there. This is an amazing series and i love every chapter. I'm not sure of it has been done as I don't remember every chapter, but would it be possible for a chapter where either Evie or Jacob does a leap of faith and it goes wrong, not so either die, but get injured badly and now has issues doing a leap of faith and need their sibling to get back to do it again? Just some sibling hurt/comfort I plan on rereading the story, so I'll see if it has been done, don't pay this any mind of it has been done Keep up the good work! |
GrandNinjaMasterRen chapter 129 . 5/14 I read this all in one night and it’s amazing. If you’re still taking requests, I’d like to see the twins swap identities (Evie pretending to be Jacob and vice versa) and/or Henry and Freddie teaming up to save the twins |
Vidgealz C Valvatore chapter 129 . 5/7 Okay. I love this. Favorite AC game honestly. If you are still doing requests, would you, by chance, accept a few from me? Prompt: Jacob and Evie get into an argument over his recklessness and endangerment of Henry and his Rooks, which results in Jacob saying some very scathing words towards Evie and storming out with only the thought of proving his sibling wrong. Jacob tricks Henry, with false words he claimed came from Evie about Henry being too weak, (inspite of his sister warning him not to take her lover, others, nor himself on missions without a well thought out plan) into coming along on a mission that backfires horribly so. Evie, recieving word from the Rooks about the failed mission, trades herself for her brother's and Henry's lives and freedom after Jacob's poorly constructed plan leaves him and Evie's lover in injured and in Starrick's merciless hands. Starrick, seeing her to be the better assassin of the two (three?), decides to force her allegiance and loyalty towards himself through pain and brainwashing techniques. Evie is tormented brutally emotionally, physically, and mentally for 5 years and slowly but successfully brainwashed against her will into believing that Starrick is her master (Evie calls him "Master", I guess) and being Starrick's best bodyguard, most lethal weapon, and the most emotionless, merciless assassin the creed has ever known. Jacob and Henry set out many times to capture her and bring her home, but each time failure and nearly losing their lives was their result. Will Evie forever be under Starrick's and the Templars thumb as their own personal lethal hellhound or will Jacob and Henry finally capture her and undo the damage done to Evie even if they have to resort to Starrick's method? You've done wonderful work, thus far. If you take this request, it would be amazing. Keep up the good work. |
OurSyndicate chapter 121 . 8/16/2019 As the Guest who suggested this, may I say it’s every bit as beautiful and emotional as I’d hoped, and really captures the essence of family over all, and the love and pride of a brother . *sniff* thanks for doing this, really |
Destructorbolt chapter 118 . 7/9/2019 nice chapter. I like seeing caring Jacob |
Guest chapter 117 . 6/22/2019 Prompt: "A Brother's Happiness" After the Frye Twins' first few weeks in London, Jacob finds out that Evie decided to try her hand at leading the Rooks, even though she was initially against the idea of the gang and has actually been doing rather well (successful raids, saving child laborers, taking down and exposing some corrupt politicians and fat-cat businessmen) When he goes to a pub he finds Evie laughing and smiling while celebrating with the Rooks, even wearing Rook green rather than her usual darker colors. Watching from afar, Jacob sees this and smiles with a small tear from his eye, happy that his older sister is having fun and is happy. |
OurSyndicate chapter 117 . 6/21/2019 Here's an idea: After their first few weeks in London, Jacob hears that Evie has tried her hand at leading the Rooks despite being initially against it, and has actually been doing really well (successful raids, saving child laborers and taking down some corrupt fat-cat businessmen) and when he spots her and some Rooks at a pub, he sees that not only is his sister having fun, but she's wearing Rook green instead of her usual black and red. And in the end, though he knows she'd fervently deny it, he's glad to see his sister smiling and having fun (perhaps he watches from a hiding spot with a smile and maybe a slight tear on his face) Perhaps call it "A Brother's Pride" |
User chapter 115 . 6/9/2019 Can you do an au were they were separated when they were born and later they found each other please? Thank you! :D |
User chapter 111 . 4/21/2019 Love your writing! Could you write one where Evie or Jacob goes and the other goes crazy searching for the other twin please? Thank you! :) |
Sakin2003 chapter 45 . 3/28/2019 I am crying of craziness |
Destructorbolt chapter 108 . 3/27/2019 I like this chapter, but I really feel like this is one of those chapters that needs a part 2 or 3. There's potential with this storyline. Just my opinion |
doggy bye chapter 99 . 2/1/2019 Can you do a sequel to chapter 99? |
Lessthanthreeanime chapter 100 . 1/26/2019 Congrats on 100 chapters! |
evie thorne chapter 97 . 1/7/2019 Could you do one where evie gives birth in fromt of lucy. my firend took hers down :( |
Yaga fan of October chapter 24 . 12/25/2018 And I'm crying now. Great writing, I mean it. This great fanfic, sad, but great. |