I’m so confused, there’s so many things happening that have already happened during this fic but it’s written like those previous instances don’t exist...

That is a good chapter.
There are just two errors in there : first, the name of the clan is Quileute and not Quilieute, secondly you wrote "cationic state" while the correct term is "catatonic state"

Oh I Love this ending...Just how I pictured their relationship...Great Story...Thanks

Good story

I just want to start off with that I have really enjoyed this story!
But I do have a question, I thought Bella couldn’t have children? And then she had four? Can you please clarify because I have read the last three chapters multiple times and after her hospital visit her not having children never came up. But then she had children. So did you forget that tidbit or...?

I'm sorry but your writing is all over the place. Repeating yourself so many times is driving me crazy, especially when you say something as a narrator before or after a character already said the exact same thing.

Another issue is how you forget what you wrote. There's a scene at the start of the story when Bella goes to visit Lena. They have a meal, go to the beach and then Lena asks Bella a question to which you say "Bella nearly dropped her fork".

Bella doesn't blink an eye to Seth calling the Cullens "bloodsuckers" while moving into her dorm.

Just in this chapter, Charlie and Bella talk about her painting. Charlie saysRenee told me you paint now" and then later in the chapter he mentions it to Billy and Jacob. All good, except Bellas reaction to it isHow did he know? Did Renee tell him?"

There's so many more mistakes like that and many more instances where you repeat thoughts or phrases. The conversation feels fairly forced, as well.

You should really try getting a beta reader (or fire the current one if you have them) because it's very annoying to read the story as it is right now.

This was a beautiful ending. Very well written! I'm crying from joy over here

I'm so happy you explored Bella and Angela's friendship more. It acts as a perfect balance to the romantic aspects, on top of allowing Bella to feel more fleshed out. I can't wait to read more about Bella's dates!

Yay to Bella for standing up for herself! I'm living for this Strong Bella.

Ugh I hope that jerk Leo gets what coming to him. I applaud Bella for going with him to get the drink, but obviously their bartender is in on their disgusting tactics. Thank goodness she called Jake.

I'm loving the story so far! There are some continuity, and grammar issues, but they don't take away from the story and you can easily understand what you mean.

such a beautiful story! love the ups and downs and the happy ending.

This chapter made me cry! Team Jake 4 ever!

This was really good! Thank you for writing this, I like how you didn't rush about the imprinting, more so you just let it slowly unfold in the story.

This was so cute! I'm so glad I found it. Happy writing!