this was a very sweet chapter. I think you did the romantic part of it very well. having established how much they feel for each other a simple honest asking worked for them. :)

this was a great chapter. a sweet summer make-out session

this was a great chapter! i felt like i was there at the ball with them all. ;)

the sword was incredible, and that part with Caspian at the end made laugh out loud

this is a sweet start to a string of one-shots

this is aan great story! love how you portrayed susan and caspian! hope there will be another chapter :D

This is great, update soon.

It's very slow and some bits just don't make sense

Ahhhhh this chapter was so beautiful!

Please! Continue with the history, very entertaining this one, remain very hooked!

Loved the update.

Super cool to see the dynamic between Eustace and the siblings. And, ugh I cannot wait to see the wedding! As always, super amazing update

Oh the children showing up gave me Suspian baby feels! Can't wait for the wedding chapter!

Loved seeing an update. Wonderful chapter.

I got so excited when I got an email that said you updated! I love how you write these characters and that chapter was just cute. Great job and can't wait for more!

i loooove a good sex scene! i have read some really horrible ones (yes suspian ones) with too many useless details that make those scenes devoid of any love or feelings.. but yours was really well written and focused more on the sensations and feelings involved than the act itself, so bravo!
the proposal was also extremely inspired and i am surprised to read romance doesn't come naturally to you. i also loved lucy and susan's cute little sister bonding scene, it was adorable!
as always, i enjoyed the chapter very very much!
cheers!