Reviews for Yatagarasu's New Beginning
Silver4700 chapter 13 . 2/28/2018
First off, Hi! It’s been a while (formerly known as PokemonTrainer4700). I was just bored and looked for something to read, and I eventually came to see if there were any stories of yours that I missed (other than the KH crossovers. Finally got till the game, but still playing through so I haven’t read them yet). I. Can say with certainty that not only is this one of my favorite stories written by you, but it gives me a reason to play AAI finally.

I really liked Robin. He is just cool. The thing about him is that yes, he is one of those “orphaned-at-a-young-age” kid (which I don’t have a really big problem with as much admittedly), but he also made himself useful by learning how to hack. I respect that of him. Either ways, I feel like I have a bunch to say about him, but it can all be summarized in a simple sentence: while nowhere near as much as the Feys, he has it rough.

Moving on to Kay...my word, I REALLY want to play investigations because of her. I may have not played the game, but from what I hear (and what I read here) you portrayed her excellently. I believe that she made it onto my list of top 10 AA characters...I just need Investigations to finalize it.

Anyways, I am very tempted to write my own story in your universe (if permissible by you)...still thinking on that though. Maybe even have a case set in then 19th century...I actually DO have a case made taking place then, took me 3 days to make and perfect...anyways, if you want story ideas, I can share the case with you. Anyways, yea. Might make a story in your universe.

Lastly, but certainly not least, excellent job, as usual. You have no idea the amount of respect I have for you and your stories. They’re always short, but always very fufilling.

Prosecutor Silver Locke signing off...
PierceTheVeils chapter 14 . 6/2/2016
Yay, Logic Chess! I'll get to reading the whole story when finals are over, but for now...

It's a pet peeve of mine when people announce POV. I feel like it shouldn't be necessary. But as long as you don't switch every paragraph, I can enjoy the story. It's just a personal tick.

Ooh, Robin? As in, Robin Newman?

Darn it. Not Robin Newman. Ah well. This is just as interesting. But is Edgeworth gonna just ignore the fact this guy stole from a grocery store?

I really like how you wrote this. You make me want to use Logic Chess for the single purpose of having you work with me. It all runs really smoothly, translates well to fanfiction, and... just, good job! Thanks for leaving me the link to this story!
WolfieRed23 chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
Aww so cute! I can't wait to see how their dynamic is in Phantom Investigation and take Lium down! Take exaan down! Edgeworth wins the trials! Sorry I'm like this.
WolfieRed23 chapter 12 . 5/25/2016
Time for the climax! It's about to go down!
WolfieRed23 chapter 9 . 5/24/2016
Anime reference! Anime/Phoenix reference!
WolfieRed23 chapter 8 . 5/24/2016
You're welcome! Honestly, I know a kid who wears a fedora all the time like Robin so it's kinda funny comparing them, even if the idea came from Ray. And an AceTablet? Really? Putting the universes name instead of apple?
WolfieRed23 chapter 7 . 5/24/2016
Uh yah I think this is the longest chapter so far. Love the logic chess and kay made some great points while Edgeworth did as well, can't lie about that with the he's just a kid thing, but they are under an agreement now! Besides, Edgeworth and gumshoe have both been, technically, members of the Yatagarasu by helping Kay bring down the smuggling ring.
WolfieRed23 chapter 6 . 5/22/2016
I bet he'll return them a little bit, based on his reactions to her muttering, and eventually to have the same thing for her!
WolfieRed23 chapter 5 . 5/22/2016
I wouldn't say hate, but at the moment I dislike you. This isn't what I meant when I said I wanted to see their dynamic!
WolfieRed23 chapter 4 . 5/22/2016
While it may have been an info dump, it definitely had its funny moments!
WolfieRed23 chapter 3 . 5/21/2016
Oh I feel so bad for him! But why would the bad guy be hunting robin down? He hasn't said anything so it doesn't make sense. Hm. Well I'll find out later I suppose.
WolfieRed23 chapter 2 . 5/21/2016
Oh man I'm excited! I can't wait to see how robin and kay interact!
WolfieRed23 chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
Lion King inspiration, I'm calling lion king inspiration! You CANNOT tell me otherwise! Can't wait to see they rest of Robin's story!