| Reviews for Twilight Retold, What Should Have Happened |
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   weepingbirch chapter 9 . 7/22/2017 Wow! Great story. It will be interesting to see if James and Victoria makes an appearance. I look forward to seeing where you take us next. |
| indigobenson23 chapter 9 . 10/25/2016 There's more to this right? Its amazing |
| aryalyn chapter 9 . 6/30/2016 Ehh...it was good until the whole virgin thing. I get the waiting for your mate thing but she didn't know when of if she was ever going to find her mate. I mean, it's one thing for a human to wait until they're 25 or 30 (that's rare) but for someone who knows that they can live forever, I just don't believe they would not try to find some comfort from time to time. 80 years is a very long time. |
| wolf eyes chapter 8 . 6/9/2016 sweet! there should be a vampire/ shifter party! and the some nomads should show up to start some trouble but then get a butt whoopin! |
| indigobenson23 chapter 8 . 6/7/2016 Bad ass! I love your work! Can't wait for more! |
| The Morrigan Goddess of Battle chapter 8 . 6/7/2016 more more ! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2016 I like the story. I love the love seems also. Keep writing. P.S. Separate your quotes from the rest of the texts. That makes it a bit easier to get into the character. ( Just a constructive criticism.) |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/4/2016 Love the fic can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, please? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/4/2016 Lol |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/4/2016 I'm so happy I found this fic, it's freaking awesome! |
| FabPezBerry78 chapter 7 . 6/6/2016 lol |
| FabPezBerry78 chapter 6 . 6/6/2016 hell yeah i love Bad Ass bella :) |
| FabPezBerry78 chapter 5 . 6/6/2016 :) |
| FabPezBerry78 chapter 4 . 6/6/2016 so sad :( poor bella |
| FabPezBerry78 chapter 2 . 6/6/2016 beautiful and cute |
