This was such a great read. I loved this story so much, it was absolutely one of the best Monkees stories I've ever read on here. I hope y'all continue writing other stories in the future because this was an absolute masterpiece!

Loved how you used The Doctor's quote. Time some wobbly wobbly. Dr Who rocks.

Wow! This was a FANTASTIC story! I started reading and couldn't stop. Thank you for sharing your creativity and imagination with the rest of us. I'll add this to my list of favorites to be reread over and over again.

PLEASE, this is so good! You REALLY, REALLY need to upload it to Wattpad, you'll get more noticed too and it's easier to write fanfiction. Please check it out and put this story on it. I LOVE IT! It actually makes me love Mike even more. I also adore the references [Maggie Simms-I see what you did there]. ;)

Amazing, thank you both for this great story
Needed tissues for the final chapter, but good ending

Amazing story, just kept reading chapter after chapter, but after this one (18) i had to stop to dry my eyes

I've loved this story! I'm sorry that it's over, but I'm glad everything has ended well for everyone. I'll be looking forward to the next story. ;)

Very curious as to what happens next!

Oh, it's Mary? I honestly had suspected it was Jacob trying to keep 'Victor' away from 'Elizabeth'. Interesting turn! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Yay, I finally got to read the whole story so far XD I've been meaning to for weeks.
Really clever and well thought-out, this. The time-transcending parts are seamless, well done.
And oh gosh I hope Mike doesn't get sick again! He's been through so much already. And what could be happening back at the pad? Hmm. Halloween material there!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Yes, a new chapter! No, Mike's in pain! Interesting chapter! Can't wait to find out more! :)

Oh, how SWEET! and Arthur is a saint. bless him.

The real Davy would never step out on a friend's girl.

Oh, man. So many things I love about this tale. Micky feeding Jacob. Davy forgetting to ask a girl for her phone number. Peter trusting Mike so much that he doesn't question Mike's truthfulness about Jacob. The picture of Peter carrying mike into the hospital. That Arthur recognizes a scumbag in Victor. That Arthur knew to write down the experience just to help the real mike. Gotta keep reading!

Absolutely LOVING this story and did a double take at the Doctor Who call-out!

Cant wait to keep reading to see if Arthur is really Micky somehow. And Davy is really the dreaded Victor. But, Peter as a doctor? I can sure see that!

Gotta head to work but wanted to let you know I am reading and loving your story!