Reviews for Tale Of The Ill-Fated Brothers
TeamRed1 chapter 7 . 5/26
Hi! I love this story! I know it has been a few years... but are you still going to continue it? If so, I can't wait for another chapter!
Codename-SN chapter 6 . 2/28
Clumsy adorable tiny mage! The best description I've ever heard ahshdjdjd lmao
MonkHerrick chapter 7 . 1/20
Awesome story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
pavlinagiot chapter 7 . 12/7/2019
*still waiting for the new chapter* can't wait to see what happens next!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/18/2018
yay!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/3/2018
What a cliffhanger! Please please please continue it! I need to know what happens next!
neon.ether chapter 7 . 7/2/2018
You should update this story even though it’s been like a year since you last did lol I just like it a lot
pavlinagiot chapter 7 . 4/1/2018
please so update
Guest chapter 7 . 12/11/2017
UPDATE GOD DMAMIT
Enjali chapter 7 . 7/11/2017
Yay, you updated! You didn't drop this story, I was worried you did. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Ladyfire-Azula chapter 7 . 7/7/2017
Yo, I completely understand. I see myself in Zeref and seeing him turned into an abusive asshole is heart breaking. Ways you can improve is telling less and showing more. Use implicate details, not tell us the reasons for everything (like the hand hold) show us symptoms (like Lucy appearing nervous and grabs onto Natsu's hand) and let the readers draw their conclusions. For Fairy Heart, do what you think is best. I am interested to see what else you have in store:3
hateme101 chapter 7 . 7/7/2017
awe i was hoping it would be a nalu story or she could be with Zeref. But as for ideas, fairy tail welcomes them into the guild and than follow the manga/anime as much as you want. Have them go on missions and make a team. would be great for them to come across Zeref's demons like melody and deloria (spelled wrong). Would love to see their reaction.
Dr Yandere chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
Wrong! If you actually read the manga very carefully, tgere is an image of Natsu and Zeref with their parents. Zeref is at most 3 years older, nothing more.
togawa rizu chapter 6 . 4/17/2017
plz update i really like your story
pavlinagiot chapter 6 . 4/3/2017
please update soon. this is a really awesome story!
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