In one sitting I finished all 11 chapters- I NEED MORE! It's so damn addicting I might need to reread a lot until the next update since the story has so much replay value. Heck I'll recommend this to all my friends. That and this is pure gold. I legitimately thought this was an original light novel until I finished the first chapter! by the by love your work! I hope I can read more!

You've stopped but i want more. More please.

This has been a good read so far. Looking forward to more in the future.

Everything is coming at Jaune so fast. I get the feeling he should be having a break down at everything that been happening. So I just to ask but doesn't need to be answer'd. Is Jaune some sort a secret solider in a world where I thought this was just some regular slice of life fanfic for Jaune?

Not bad, keep up the good work, looking forward to it.

dracohalo117

Wow. Expecting this to be a normal highschool AU but I was very surprised. Keep it up! (Please?)

I have concerns about this chapter. Mostly because the whole thing about Jaune being some kind of attached to terrorists or a criminal underground seem way out of left field. You could certainly write it in well, but at this moment it seems like you just threw it in there in order to have somewhere to go after a writers block or something. We already have Jaune’s past at the military school, but this too seems a bit much. Just keep in mind how much background you give to one character. See you next chapter.

I hope everything turns out okay for you. And if you have to start a brand new story that doesn't have any involvement with RWBY they go ahead. I think your writing is good enough for any story. So far this version of rwby is pretty enjoyable. Better than some long chapter stories that I've been forcing myself to read. Anyways good luck with everything and can't wait to read the next chapter.

Considering just how much Codo is escalading shit, I'll say that this friend fic is falling already.
Someone have a past, that someone want to keep it, it's his rght. If people doesn't respect that and want pry, that's just shitty behavior. Trying to treat Jaune's behavior as 'wrong' is flat bs.

Great story, rather odd concept, but a refreshing read non the less. looking forward to any updates

Good chapter, keep up the good work.

dracohalo117

interesting how this turned out the key cards being placed on the table and a big planned event a afternoon/evening drinking together and setting things straight and drunk coco being jealous and attacking jaune did expect that but that will be interesting lets see what happens are we getting some form of lemon ish event or will something intervene

also yea make it harem but obviously it can be a sub plot behind the story line happening sometimes but taking being the key focus (hermaphrodite ruby would be better then trap boy ruby since we dont know all the detail only ruby has a penis as well and likes girls clothing and is very feminine so ruby could have both and it not be gay but beside the point)

i understand im still interested in rwby but after montys death rt kinda ruined rwby so i only read fanfics and jaune eccentric ones

The times come for the sign of the world ending. Coco being friend zoned even further into being in a no way out zone

I was not excepting that but it was all good in the end. Not sure what to feel about a ruby with a penis but nice writing. Yay

So the war has begun of sorts, with the council trying to get the supposed bad kids out while the disciplinary division are out trying to prove themselves. But man, even Goodwitch is not happy, and she is supposed to be impartial. Good thing Ozpin is on his side or they would be out by the semester.

The parents are being very irrational, and to employ the 'talking bad' tactic, they are more childish than them.

Weiss you dolt, you basically broke all chances of a truce, what with your rivalry with Yang and your elitism getting to your head. You even broke the law to try and falsely accuse the students. The fact that the council have that much power is quite an issue. I think that is why they were not informed of the change, Ozpin likely knew something like this would happen and subtly avoided telling them to remind them of their positions. Hope you show Pyrrha and the others reeling back from the supposed loss of power and maybe grill Weiss for screwing their chances to get Jaune on their side. Not to mention more of Jaune 'lightly' telling them of the power he has and what they no longer have to make sure they know this.

Qrow as the new supervisor? Not sure if this will be good or bad.