Ha! I knew it. Blake will be reading the next part. Can't wait what kind of reaction she'll be having when she gets to the end bit _

Honestly, I'm just glad your back, that was phenomenal!

Sweet, this stories lives. Well, real life happens and it is not my place to be nosy about it. On a unrelated note, getting this chapter update proved my suspicions that the story pages or broken and stopped updating a day ago.

Have to remember where things left off. Right, Jaune getting knocked out. I agree with Velvet that physical books are superior to digital ones. It just feels better to hold the book in your hand. See, the correct response when Coco mentioned Jaune is nice to cute girls should have been "Did Coco just call Fox a cute girl?"

So, am I the only one that is getting a Frankenstein and Igor vibe from Ren and Nora? I had completely forgotten what Pyrrha was trying to sensor until it was revealed. My reaction match Nora's where I was expecting something worse. If that is Neptune's reaction to young Glynda, I wonder who he would react to seeing Blake's mother.

Tuskon's book store. Velvet is not going to be happy to see what happens to him later on in this story. For her current problems, Tuskon's advice was actually decent. I had forgotten how Forever Fall differed in this story from the original. Yang's comment makes me try to remember if they is actually any scene later in this story where Jaune is taking a shower or something like that.

I waited this long for a new chapter. I can wait however long it takes for the next one.

excellent work on this chapter and welcome back :)

I'm not going to lie this was disappointing, I mean you just have them start reading a book, most people when writing a reaction fic usually lets the cast know they are reacting to another world, otherwise, it just comes off as if their just reading a book.

Also, can I point out how horrible these so-called "friends" are to Jaune.
I mean the very first thing in this story is Team RWBY is insulting Jaune behind his back.
not to mention you have Blake try to kill Jaune because his book version said she's a Faunus, but the real Sun who has been going around telling everyone her secret just gets a glare what BS is that, oh and she never apologies for her action because god forbid if someone said sorry to Jaune of all people, and that is the main problem I have with this, the casts only has proper reaction when it gives them an excuse to attack or insult Jaune, but when Jaune does something amazing or kind, they don't seem to care not even his own team.

you know what I'm glad you stopped this because everyone in this is just giant assholes to Jaune, and I don't need that.

I LIKE IT! PLES MAKE MOAR!

You've got me invested with great writing and story. Please update soon!

Please come back!

I like this story!

this has potential hope you haven't abandoned it

It's too bad that this story is dead but I can somewhat related.
Cheers to a great story

I liked the chapter!

Please update this story! I love the original Tomorrow never again. But this! This is pure awesome! I love the little breaks. And e fact that you're only 6 chapters into a 60 chapters of a fanfic. Makes t a less daunting task (not that 60 chapters is daunting when it's quality all the way through).

Not only that but you're a excellent character writer. RWBY JNPR SSNN and CFY reactions seem natural to how RT portrays them (and not how the fandom percieves them).

I'm pumped for when Jaune becomes te hero of Vale (and how RWBY SSNN JNPR reacts) when Jaune runs the paladin over with the mech Glyndas hating on Jaune, his plan during the breach, his plan fleeing the dragon, him and the rest of the Vytal fighters becoming criminals. The all girl team hitting on Juane during their 4v4 vytal fight.

So many epic moments I can't wait for you to reach. So please don't let this fantastic reaction fic go into hiatus/abandoned status.

This story is great. when are you going to do another chapter

Okay...Everyone's in character, I've never heard of the story thats being read, theres interactions i've never seen before, this can only mean one thing: I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY IN MUH LIFE! Please continue soon, or at the very least, don't forget about it, that's all I'm asking!

Aww, Arkos love moments make me smile, but I have to ask...Fat employee? Where's that from?